Discussion in 'Post Ya Audios & Videos Here! - feedback forum' started by Huey Fig Newton, Sep 27, 2007.
nah he doing it on purpose
that just aint proper
you gotta structure your shit better
that flashing lights shit let know... your lines are ending all over the place n shit.. u stretching out words to make the bars fit with the other bars... alot of your bars dont really connect neither, u need to incorporate some more multis in your shit.... dont over-do it though
jesus christ this girl on the hook is terrible too son..... wow
ur voice aint bad, its just your flow/style/lyrics that need help... atleast thats something u can improve on... when u got a bad voice u just got a bad voice perioid nothigns gonna help you
you cant take any critisism at all
theres like 3 different versions of flashing lights and the amount of syllables in each line are all different...I couldn't decide which was best.
I'll reup the other one.
on and the chick..nah she can sing, it's my fault. I didn't give her enough time to harmonize and layer up on it.
her solos sound alot better.
and thanx fam, preciate it.
streetz, the other version is up. I honestly don't even really like the song that much period, ye or mine...I prolly will scrap it before I finish the whole project.
it was just somethin on my mind.
But hey, you got 4 extra plays because it didn't load up the first time. Only good thing that came out of this on your behalf.
nigga i aint clickin that shit.... learn to take some fuckin crit nigga... i said the joints was pretty good.... u wanna be in fuckin denial nigga... go head.... the rest of the world is wrong, your right.... fuckin clown...
dont even front like u aint used to be buggin on AIM back in the day like "yo quota peep this for me yo, tell me what you think" come on now nigga dont play yaself..... kanye was out then... and u aint sound nothin like him.... now all of a sudden u been rockin like this since before him? who you think you foolin nigga... prolly the same •••••• u was foolin wit that blood talk nigga... no one
when •••••• be on that "omen the lamest nigga alive" talk i wont sayin nothin, but i see why they be on you nigga... u make ya own enemies ol false flaggin ass nigga
lol @ you editing it to this....
this what you should have said the first time and i wouldnt have had no probs... but it is what it is, i aint goin hold no grudge on you, but im too lazy to edit my last post
That nigga Omen is dealing with the challenge number 2 - Oversensitivity.
I didn't edit that, I posted that and edited to tell streetz the track was up.
I don't see one comparison in how my verses are on jesus walks to kanyes other than the fact I start with "you know what?? is"
I mean what the fuck
the nigga didn't even WRITE jesus walks.
how all them beats goin? sold ... any.. yet?
well then its on the first page or wherever i quoted it from....but it dont matter
dis kid even name his albums shits 'the class clown'
i smell kanyes dick stench climbing out my speakers as i play ur tracks
What do my sales have to do with you being wack?
what does my cd title have to do with kanye?
and lol @ I can't take crit
comin here sayin I sound like someone else or I'm jackin someone else or talkin shit is not critique.
or is that the RM standard of "critique"?
the lack there of..because you are wack.
[funny]...Nigga I ain't spit a verse in 7-8 months and I can put up an old ass songs that shit on everything you've done. And this is strictly spitting.
lmfao @ you changin it to spittin cuz I said your BEATS are wack.
I'm done wit you
uppin for actual constructive feedback.
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