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  1. enef

    enef voting against DZK in every round.

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    nah he doing it on purpose

    that just aint proper
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  2. Streetsz954

    Streetsz954 Im allergic to dirt weed

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    you gotta structure your shit better


    that flashing lights shit let know... your lines are ending all over the place n shit.. u stretching out words to make the bars fit with the other bars... alot of your bars dont really connect neither, u need to incorporate some more multis in your shit.... dont over-do it though

    jesus christ this girl on the hook is terrible too son..... wow

    ur voice aint bad, its just your flow/style/lyrics that need help... atleast thats something u can improve on... when u got a bad voice u just got a bad voice perioid nothigns gonna help you
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  3. Pace Beats

    Pace Beats Doesn't Feed The Trolls

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    you cant take any critisism at all
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  4. Huey Fig Newton

    Huey Fig Newton Rebel-He-Is

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    theres like 3 different versions of flashing lights and the amount of syllables in each line are all different...I couldn't decide which was best.


    I'll reup the other one.
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  5. Huey Fig Newton

    Huey Fig Newton Rebel-He-Is

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    on and the chick..nah she can sing, it's my fault. I didn't give her enough time to harmonize and layer up on it.

    her solos sound alot better.
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  6. enef

    enef voting against DZK in every round.

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    please dont
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  7. Huey Fig Newton

    Huey Fig Newton Rebel-He-Is

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    and thanx fam, preciate it.


    streetz, the other version is up. I honestly don't even really like the song that much period, ye or mine...I prolly will scrap it before I finish the whole project.

    it was just somethin on my mind.
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  8. M.Maestro

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  9. M.Maestro

    M.Maestro Ghost

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    But hey, you got 4 extra plays because it didn't load up the first time. Only good thing that came out of this on your behalf.
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  10. NyceQTV

    NyceQTV Grayscale

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    nigga i aint clickin that shit.... learn to take some fuckin crit nigga... i said the joints was pretty good.... u wanna be in fuckin denial nigga... go head.... the rest of the world is wrong, your right.... fuckin clown...

    dont even front like u aint used to be buggin on AIM back in the day like "yo quota peep this for me yo, tell me what you think" come on now nigga dont play yaself..... kanye was out then... and u aint sound nothin like him.... now all of a sudden u been rockin like this since before him? who you think you foolin nigga... prolly the same •••••• u was foolin wit that blood talk nigga... no one


    when •••••• be on that "omen the lamest nigga alive" talk i wont sayin nothin, but i see why they be on you nigga... u make ya own enemies ol false flaggin ass nigga
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  11. NyceQTV

    NyceQTV Grayscale

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    lol @ you editing it to this....

    this what you should have said the first time and i wouldnt have had no probs... but it is what it is, i aint goin hold no grudge on you, but im too lazy to edit my last post


    good day
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  12. M.Maestro

    M.Maestro Ghost

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    That nigga Omen is dealing with the challenge number 2 - Oversensitivity.
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  13. Huey Fig Newton

    Huey Fig Newton Rebel-He-Is

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    I didn't edit that, I posted that and edited to tell streetz the track was up.


    I don't see one comparison in how my verses are on jesus walks to kanyes other than the fact I start with "you know what?? is"

    I mean what the fuck

    the nigga didn't even WRITE jesus walks.

    how all them beats goin? sold ... any.. yet?
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  14. NyceQTV

    NyceQTV Grayscale

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    well then its on the first page or wherever i quoted it from....but it dont matter
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  15. BDEE

    BDEE Dun Know Da Myspace

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    dis kid even name his albums shits 'the class clown'

    i smell kanyes dick stench climbing out my speakers as i play ur tracks

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  16. M.Maestro

    M.Maestro Ghost

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    What do my sales have to do with you being wack?
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  17. Huey Fig Newton

    Huey Fig Newton Rebel-He-Is

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    what does my cd title have to do with kanye?

    stop reachin


    and lol @ I can't take crit

    comin here sayin I sound like someone else or I'm jackin someone else or talkin shit is not critique.

    or is that the RM standard of "critique"?
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  18. Huey Fig Newton

    Huey Fig Newton Rebel-He-Is

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    the lack there of..because you are wack.

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  19. M.Maestro

    M.Maestro Ghost

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    [funny]...Nigga I ain't spit a verse in 7-8 months and I can put up an old ass songs that shit on everything you've done. And this is strictly spitting.
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  20. Huey Fig Newton

    Huey Fig Newton Rebel-He-Is

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    lmfao @ you changin it to spittin cuz I said your BEATS are wack.

    I'm done wit you


    uppin for actual constructive feedback.
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