think bout it

Discussion in 'Poetry Realm' started by D- Chillz, Dec 22, 2003.

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  1. D- Chillz

    D- Chillz tat boy tat rap & sing

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    Been sick wit a style 4 a while I got sophisticated issuez//
    Abnormally neva formally causin heartbreak providin da tissuez//
    I break bones & take chrome & take thronez//
    Guaranteed 2 get down lik disfunctional famz & break homez//
    leave yo thoughtz divided lik political parties//
    Can get rough & tough lik basic trainin in da armies//
    Basically masterin an ill flow tat can make ill dow//
    Turnin wifes 2 wid-owz ya get slept on lik pill-owz//
    Got nice no sacrifice but the truth it was accidental//
    This rap thing is mental every1 knew I had potential//
    Burnin sheetz of paper wit pure labor//
    Savin shit 4 later cause my shit is deep lik craters//
    Shawties I kno want me launch careers & blow//
    Don't even kno if they there 4 show//
    Really give a fuck bout these//
    Imagine a life nuthin right without cheeze
    Think bout it can live without it really good factors//
    Most rapperz livin fake livez & u wonder y they good actors//
    U want me 2 slumber 2 go 3 feet under cause u learnin from me//
    I'm currently known displayed & shown so peeps kno about me lik da birdz & da bees//
    test
  2. Mind~$oul

    Mind~$oul I'm Pretty

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    Seems more like a rap than a poem to me. Pretty decent couldnt really understand some of the things you was tryin to say at first because of your spelling. Fix that up a little bit. Keepp it up

    one luv
    test
  3. eatemup

    eatemup New Member

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    yeah this sounds more like a rap but hey it was cool
    test
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