There's more to it than you know

Discussion in 'Open Mic' started by troubledwaters, Sep 26, 2010.

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  1. troubledwaters

    troubledwaters New Member

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    Gotta keep going, one foot in front of the next
    But I'm becoming too tired for my tongue to express
    A slight stumble sends me to a sudden stop, fear
    I hear a bullet whiz by above my top, tears
    Quickly get back up, thinking I'll get away possibly
    But my shadow's not the only one that follows me
    This is one round I can't lose, a life's a tough loss
    But my thoughts ended there, I hear a gunshot--

    I stalk my prey swiftly, 9mm Luger in my hand
    Obedience overpowers will to not shoot another man
    Breath visible, mindset miserable, two ways I am so cold
    I fire but he fell, last round, shot missed, time to reload
    My clip's stuck, he gets up, I can't lose him
    Try to relax, breath steady, muscles loosen
    I put a new clip in, raise the pistol, ethics are a tough loss
    The timing is right, eye to the sights, I hear a gunshot--

    His eyes scan the room, I try to maintain composure
    But it's too much, their entire family name is over
    Their charm, their wit, their love, all stand at stake
    He asks if I'm innocent, why is it my hands would shake
    I couldn't give them away, the sting would never pass then
    He points his gun at me, I point my finger to the attic
    I'm crushed to dust, I now know that trust's a tough loss
    Mind's full, don't think much of it when I hear a gunshot--

    They all report to me, for every question I'm the answerer
    Thanks to my rise to power, I'm the new German Chancellor
    Some speak out against me, they wish to demolish grace
    I'm simply trying to separate elites from all the waste
    All these criticisms from the Jews resting on my head
    I have hard facts to back me, their ethics are misled
    I sigh and look out the window, respect's a tough loss
    But a smile comes to my face when I hear a gunshot--
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  2. T.R.C....

    T.R.C.... New Member

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    thats pretty interesting dude nice flow decent vocab all around dope drop
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  3. nO gOoD!

    nO gOoD! Life Music :: Press Play

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    yeah this is pretty good. the flow was pretty tight and your vocab was nice. some parts of it were choppy, but this was nice, I liked it.
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  4. cram oremor

    cram oremor New Member

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    Liked the way you kept bringin it back to "when I hear a gunshot" takes talent to do that if you ask me. nice lyrics, good drop homie!
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