There is hunger...in the dark

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  1. DethStryque

    DethStryque DethStryque theInvincible

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    THERE IS HUNGER IN THE DARK





    Let the Darkness come

    Let infinite blackness darker than starless space

    Cloak this world with cold cruelty

    Drink blood like the Dark Harvest's rum

    Swim in the precious red like sharks of hate

    Your pitiless passion stabbin n climaxin in my soul like my heart's been raped!

    Your eyes glimmer with the sinful vengeful darkness of Hell's gullet

    Your voice hypnotic and melodic as a harpy's harmonies

    Serenading me,compelling me,robbing me of volition

    Until I wreck the Ship of my Self upon the fanged rocks of your Greed.

    You are nearly impossible to resist,nearly impossible to contest

    You are every soul's dark secret sensuously made flesh

    Your touch thrills me,makes my heart race and sends chills through me...like Fear

    You disrobe me so my spirit stands naked before you.And here

    Your arms and legs embrace me with orgasmic hatred.You whisper in my ear

    With sweet malicious tenderness: "I will devour you.

    Penetrate me as I surround you and lick your tears

    Make hate to me with your loins,fill me with the seed of your fury.

    I will feast on you for years."

    FOR THERE IS HUNGER...IN THE DARK



    Ravenous,merciless...beautiful ravager

    The face of destruction has never been so sweet

    You spice your venom with delightful sugars

    You dress your treachery in the finest garments

    You murder Hope,coldly smother dreams

    All the while murmuring insincere platitudes

    About Love Undying.

    Beautiful ravager.Forked silver tongue hissing

    Beguiling wonderful lies while kissing

    Me with that perfect mouth ripe with the juice

    Of those whom you feasted upon before me.

    You draw the shade against the face of Amon Ra

    And pull me into the stygian,sorcerous shadows

    Where the Unseen sees us...and cackles

    In appreciation of sampling the elixir of my heart

    You have raised the ways of Ruin to a refined art

    Lay me down upon your bed of thorns

    Your lovely thighs straddle my loins

    "Deth..make Death to me," you whisper as you kiss my eyes

    "Soon you and I will be joined."



    FOR THERE IS HUNGER... IN THE DARK



    *work in progress*
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  2. Coup d'état

    Coup d'état Don't believe the hype

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    WOW. This is utterly fantastic...inspiring.

    My jaw dropped at the symbolic imagery to, imo, the great lord of the dark himself.
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  3. the omega man

    the omega man so, it goes

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    real good shit...much props
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  4. DethStryque

    DethStryque DethStryque theInvincible

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    Thank you all of you so very much...
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  5. DethStryque

    DethStryque DethStryque theInvincible

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    I hope to put up a few more pieces of my poetry here.I really like the thriving poetry section here and I hope I can contribute to an upswing in activity.I also write straight up stories.Are there any story places on this site?
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    DethStryque DethStryque theInvincible

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    Thank you for the madd props my manz omega!
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  7. xCimmiCx

    xCimmiCx ^¿~bless~?^

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    WOW!!! too many things to quote i'll grab a few!!!

    first off my favorite!!!

    Ravenous,merciless...beautiful ravager

    loved it!!!

    Until I wreck the Ship of my Self upon the fanged rocks of your Greed.
    You are nearly impossible to resist,nearly impossible to contest
    You are every soul's dark secret sensuously made flesh
    Your touch thrills me,makes my heart race and sends chills through me...like Fear

    that third line is beautiful... the images you created in my mind were amazing... i pictured this as sort of a 2d paper over paper animation or cartoon if you will... not 100% sure you know what i mean, but if you've seen Finding Neverland with Johnny Depp then where he's explain'n the concept of his new theater piece where the ship and the waves are on screen... yea!!! that part, thas how this whole piece was depicted in my head!!! simply brilliant!!!

    please sir' may i have some more!!!!!!

    -CimmiC
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