Discussion in 'Open Mic' started by TheBigPayback, Sep 5, 2012.
GOOD BATTLE. I'm going to give a thorough vote and breakdown on this tomorrow...
slaughterville shit right here. God damn hommie lmaoooooo
not bad and good drop.
MV got this shti
I read this battle carefully and this is my impression:
Using the uncheatable Rapmusic WarZone Voting Guidleline [ RWZ GUIDELINE ]
Sound Manipulation: Almost a tie...but MV
Rhyme Scheme: Rhyme scheme is where how and in what way the rhymes actually rhyme...and since MV didn't always perfectly rhyme, and Big Pay had at times a more creative rhyme scheme? Inner rhymes, ABBA rhymes, etc.This was a tie
Multis: How many mulisyllable rhymes you have...MV
Focus: Was the lyricist targeting his opponent with his concepts? It doesn't always have to be personals...did the lyricist relate whatever he said in a way that dissed his opponent, gave himself props, or both?...MV
Content: was the material that comprised the rap actually fresh? Did it have played out concepts or did the lyricist actually take the time to come with fresh unique material...or did the actual "content" of the rap fall somewhere between being consistently repetitive or consistently fresh?...MV
Closer: MV...Big Pay seemed to run out of gas and/or lost his attention span [ another aspect of Focus ] so his closer didn't hit as hard as MV's did.
Need votes on these battles. Appreciate it:
Generally id do some arguing right now.
But this all in fun. good job mv.
thanks everyone that voted.
You didn't do bad Big Pay. Much respect for your efforts. It's just that you didn't seem especially focused on bringing multilayered flames to MV throughout the whole battle without a lapse in focus.
Maybe you guys could get a rematch and go 2-3 rounds this time. I prefer a voting guideline that's fair quick comprehensive and uncheatable, and multiround battles with multiple bars to make the winners and losers as clear as possible.
lol payback you can keep the avy I just wanted to battle for fun
this is a really good battle to me mv took it his rhymes were more creative and the flow was on point thebigpayback had a sick verse so sick it made me reads mvs again so I gave it to mv
payback had some good lines, but so did Mv, he came a little bit more smooth and coherent . vote MV
Lol that was funny
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