The West Is Back (DROP LINKS!!!)

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  1. Trinidad-

    Trinidad- The Hidden Truth

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    just some westcoast mixtape track we did over a dre beat actually one of my homies is gonna do the last verse so its not really done yet..a lot of yall probably aint gonna be feelin this since its westcoast but enjoy and leave links so i can check out some more tracks

    sorry i had to do myspace i forgot my soundclick password sot he qualitys a lil worse d/l if u can

    www.myspace.com/trinidadla

    trinidad on first verse and hooks
    just dymez on second verse
    holla
    test
  2. Medium Matt

    Medium Matt tHe mEnAce

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    .::::listening::::..


    fuck yeah. jeah!!!! difinatley feelin this ish. flow is dope. production is sick. i could bump this in the ride. hook is sick. lets smoke til our lungs calapse. i like that. diffinatley a clean song mayne, keep doin ur thing and drop more illness.


    http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread.php?t=935024

    ^^^^ Hit me back pimp
    test
  3. Non$en$e

    Non$en$e The Truth

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    First thing I notice is the guy on the hook needs more emotion, you should yell that shit lol...

    I see you using that dre beat...it's sick


    First guy - Your the one on the hook...Your flow is good, but I think you should change ya delivery a little and swtich it up a little, come aggressive man lol make the beat work for you, not the other way around nah mean? You still came good on this though, but work on the emotion and delivery.

    Second guy - I like how you came off on this, you had flava kid, you was doing it on the beat...I ain't really got much to say here you seem like you really got ya style down pack.

    Overall this was good, BUT it could of been better if the guy who did the first verse and hook was more into as the second guy was. Those are only minor
    faults though which can easily be worked on. But keep it up..Peace
    test
  4. KonceptSs

    KonceptSs New Member

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    Dres beats are god likee

    Love his strings


    Hook is fucking dope as shitt, love the bounce in itt...nice delivery on itt..


    First Cat = Basic lyrics but cats delivery is dope, and swagger is nice as hell.....

    LOVEEEE THIS FUCKING HOOK


    2nd Cat = Killing shitt dope style also...


    Feeling this track man, finiish it!!


    http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread.php?t=934997
    Holler @ mee herenessserse


    GONNA SMOKEEE TILL OUR LUNGS COLLAPSEEEE

    illness
    test
  5. j$crILLa

    j$crILLa ~$crillVille~

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    dre beat always dope...

    hook is pretty fuckin dope, i love that westcoast shit

    verse 1 has nice delivery and flow, basic rhymes, but fuck it i like it

    verse 2 dope voice, likin the style no doubt...

    yall put it down keep it crackin , finish the track yallz...

    http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread.php?t=935224
    test
  6. Noncentz

    Noncentz Sieg Heil, M'fer!

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    This is nice.. I like that westcoast ish.. I ain't got nothin bad to say about this no criticisms or ways to make it better.. I like this song imma download / burn hehe

    let me know what you think

    http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread.php?p=12781460


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    Oh fuck yeah.. I just heard the second verse that opening line was hot good shit
    test
  7. Trinidad-

    Trinidad- The Hidden Truth

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    thanks i think i got yall
    test
  8. _RhYmEs_

    _RhYmEs_ Need Dope Beats??

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    Listening,

    dre is ill we know we know,,
    hook is tight, more energy would've made it perfect,
    flow is coo, basic but very effective, tight swagger, really riding the beat,
    second dude on some old eminem shit, but coo, riding the beat well too, hook is catchy i like it, coo coo, quality is ass, but i could tell you didnt intend that,

    hit me up,
    http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread.php?t=930024
    ^^KoOL
    test
  9. Trinidad-

    Trinidad- The Hidden Truth

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    iight i got u homie that track was sick..up
    test
  10. Ben Official

    Ben Official Active Member

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    beat is oh so dope

    hook is simple but dope, catchy

    everything is on point, fellow pothead dope..

    flow is nice, delivery is ill

    shits dope
    test
  11. Grandiose

    Grandiose five large

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    /\ HahahaHAHA, look at this fucking cornball!!!


    The track was hot though, well, when PT was rhyming.
    test
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