"The Tracks My Train Travels" Featuring My Daughter Aolani

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  1. ran-dom31z3d

    ran-dom31z3d formaly know as gdot

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    quality is a little wiered it makes ur voice sound slured beats cool ys the hook slowing down:(
    like the beat switch up its a little to repetitive though ur lyrics seem real metaphorical.
    ig ot a question did ur girl leave u since u started music agian. hooks cool on second verse its jsut there though not catchy or memoribal soul lines cool delivery with that flow makes it fluid.yay beat switch.this is nice is that an oragan on the beats.
    this is like abstract positive .... its wiered but good soming new feeling this i like some of ur old ish more though :S
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  2. The Real Finale

    The Real Finale Go fuck yourself

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    Not the biggest fan of the beat but raps make the track worth a listen.

    Flows pretty good.

    Change up is nice, like the beat much better after that.

    Well polished.

    You remind me of someone, im just not sure who.

    Overall dopeness, another example of taking a wack beat and making it fresh, props.

    You already peeped it, but anyone else whos lookin to get feedback on thier shit, throw some up on my page, and ill reply > http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread.php?p=13301712#post13301712
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  3. The Real Finale

    The Real Finale Go fuck yourself

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    maybe KMK is who you remind me of? not sure
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  4. TWO M.C.S

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  8. mattafact

    mattafact My album > yours.

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    oh shnap instant legend, a rm pioneer! haha whats good man, long time since ive heard your stuff. good track you got going on right here, the changeup is nice, you're an inspiring kinda guy you know that? haha, i admire how music just seems to run through your veins, you seem like the kinda guy who makes music primarily because he just loves to make the music. it sounds so simple but its not so common. i love it man. keep doing what youre doing even though you definitely don't need to be reminded to keep on truckin. payce!
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  9. TWO M.C.S

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    illuzion, lets jump on somethin together
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  11. Prophyt

    Prophyt Future Of Hip-Hop

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    Good track fam...alot of the same feelins as others have stated...production was overall good...dope lyrics...flow was on point...you def. doin ya thang! You posted this earlier in the month but I aint seen it...my bad for bein late haha....Like I said that..."The Track My Train Travels" is the joint I peeped...and its good fam...Like what I heard!

    Hit me back...Let me kno what you think...thanks...
    http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread.php?p=13320161#post13320161
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  12. Pride.

    Pride. yours truly.

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    beats cold as fuck, i've used this one on my demo.

    aight cool voice, i think i've heard you before.

    riding the beat nicely. lyrics are penned well.

    wooooah at the slow down on the first hook. hahahaha, cool switch up. the new beat is cold, too.

    that's cool to put you daughter on here. wow old is she?

    cool hook.

    'adam and eve and adam's biting the •••••' - cool.

    nice track.
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  13. TraGiC

    TraGiC Recognize Real

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    ooooooook here we goooooooooooooo....

    background vocals fit well...she got a nice voice...

    IL doing his shit...wowwwwwww switch up here...nice change of pace..rocked both beats well like usual..i cant wait till i can get my son on tracks...sooooooo cuteeeee...wow

    you know if u need a verse or chorus ,,,im always down to work with you also...

    1 up

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  14. TWO M.C.S

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    appreciate the looks folx
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  16. Sick-Sense

    Sick-Sense the muthafin ruggratt!

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    your myspace is busy as hell lol

    i really can't get into the first beat. i dont know what it is, it may be too happy. haha although you rode it well, i just dont like it.

    beat switch was cool

    second beat is nice, loving the vibe.
    your little girl sounds adorable man, she really added that special touch. im digging this verse alot better than the first one. flow was cool, im digging how you doubled the words. i can tell the quality is there, it could just be the mixing.

    good stuff, fam
    keep them coming.
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  17. TWO M.C.S

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    good lookin out
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  18. Neruk

    Neruk Runky Runky

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    Im diggin the accoustic beat.. singing on the hook is descent.. 1st verse is nice, a couple parts the flow i wasnt diggin..

    change up...new beat is nice..flow is nice on this 2nd part... change up type hook by you sounds good.. nice shit.. yeah this part on the 2nd beat isnice, i like the chick singing in the background

    nice shit man, dont really know about the wholebeat change, prolly be better as 2 seperate tracks
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  19. Stray411

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    Returning, my bad on the delay.

    Hot song...loving the creativity. Both beats sound good, but I would have liked to hear that first one more before the change up. Vocals and mixes sound good over here.
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  20. Gavreil

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    nice voice ill flow on point ,,good work keep it up fam
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