"The Tracks My Train Travels" Featuring My Daughter Aolani

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  1. Nokas

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    i liked it man,, espec when the beat switches up it keeps the listener tuned in,, and your daughter lil voice was sweet.. good stuff man.. both beats were nice and the overall mixing was clean... bass was hummin.. last verse was kinda wierd lyric wise... but it was deep.. nice smooth track dogg stay banging em out.. peace.. noke
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  2. TWO M.C.S

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    good lookin big homie
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    zzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz
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  4. SpoonFull

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    legend, wtf? U change ur name?

    haha, anyways. This beat is SEXXXXXXXXY as fuck. Flow and style are the same i've grown to love from you. WRiting game is ON POINT. lol, just bogged out. WOOOO 2nd beat is dope as fuck. Yes sir, this one is going on the ipod! You have a lot of sing songy shit in your tracks which is mad fresh and a little reminicent on older Atmosphere ish.

    anywayyys, vvery dope joint here downloaded
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  5. TWO M.C.S

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    thank you spooner - and jeff banned my other name, because i put my future website address in a couple thread titles lmao
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  6. ..milkman..

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    damn man, i could have sworn i left feed on this.... i know that i've heard this song like 4 times already lmao...

    anyway... returnin feed:

    beat choice is nasty... really feelin the mood it sets. vocals are tight... laid back but yet you have emotion, i like that... most people cant do both, but then again the beat just sets the tone. lyrics are hot homie. "dont need nothin out here but ya coat for warmth"... true shit.

    switch up.

    haha okay okay. beat is still nasty. Flow is tight, your on point. Your content is dope famm. its cool how you put your daughter in this... cool shit..

    stay the fuck up man.

    holla
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  7. midwestTHUG

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    devize always raw wit it

    quality sound tight

    green brings it out!!!it really do

    lyrics iz raw
    delivery sound tight

    filled by mankinds envy n hate line came out hott

    beat switch sounded smooth
    lol

    fruity soundin beat

    lines sounded smooth through out tha tracc
    you mos def got some shit

    ya daughter ripped up on tha adlib lol
    stay up playa
    -one-
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    lovin the beat.."the green brings it out" yes it does..feelin the flow on the beat..nice delivery..lyrics and content on point..i like the switch up alot..it builds up the track big time..good shit..overall good song..keep up the good wrk

    -Riggs
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    lol...yea homie hahah, a few more hott minutes we'da had a hott hour or sum shit....but yea man it's been a while and we still aint done nuffin....ima have to get up with you sometime so we can push suntn out....

    any how playa peepin the track...you always come with some original shit man,i give you that....beat is ill...like the lil breakdown then flip up on beats adds a lil umph to the track...haha thats the shit getting ya lil girl on there homie...thats just real as fuck...tryna get her started early....in a year or 2 she gonna make daddy look silly on tracks haha...be singin and spitten all over ya shits...lol....thass wsupp tho keep doin ya thing...

    pzzzz

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  11. Higher Rhymes

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    Wow.. I was completely impressed by this man, I'm telling you. The beat was DOPE as fu..dgenuts.. real easy to flow to. I can tell you actually THOUGHT about what you wrote, everything flows together like magic man. Your flow is dope, delivery fits this song nicely, when the beat slowed down kinda scared me i was like uhhh LOL, then it changed into a BETTER beat lol, you are 2 dope, stay up

    ~uno ill remember to peep the next tracks you put out
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    i appreciate the thoughts folxx
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  17. STRICK9

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    returnin da favor dawg...

    1st off ive listened to a few of your songs and they ahve been nice yo...

    ok... 1st verse got an old school feel to it, taking me back to like 15 lol nice.
    not realling feeling the content, cant say anything bad just not my thing.
    ahh nice... likes the 2nd verse, delivery, content, beat is tight...
    nice drop from your daughter man...
    hook is sweet man, definately type of shit i like, feelin this
    3rd verse on point like the 2nd you can tell your very confident in your flow
    which plays a big part in how your presence comes across in a song...

    dayum nice joint dawg

    check it out yo: http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread.php?t=962157
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  18. LeKCheR

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    WTF, Legend I didnt know that was you, I havent heard from you since you dropped that suzie q album, get at me on aim sometime bro

    aim-damnimhuge69

    But besides the point, You've got alot better since I last heard you, your flow was solid as the fuck, beat wasnt exactly my style but you rode it hot, I'd love to work with you bro.

    Get at me

    Later.
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  20. Dr. Who Izzy

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    I dunno if i like the Eyedea thing going on here... The only other place i've heard this style is on the Oliver Hart CD... I don't really like it on there though... And i don't like it on here either... Listening to some of your other tracks I think you're good... I just don't like the style of rapping on this...
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