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  1. [ Yung Truth ]

    [ Yung Truth ] fuck u, pay me

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    quit talkin shit quincster
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  2. M.Maestro

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    yo Toriella
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  3. [ Yung Truth ]

    [ Yung Truth ] fuck u, pay me

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    I'ma get all links first thing tmrw morning.
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    Edicius Escrituras presionadas

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    Not bad at all nice flow and delivery.

    i give props when their due.

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  6. Blues

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    vocals are too low in the beat...

    boost them shits up like 3 or 4 dbs


    The flow is real nice...very similiar to you-know-who...but you already know that....lyrics are pretty good..nothing crazy outstanding...but solid...the emphasis here is delivery...which is damn just a lil too like somone else's.....work a little harder to sperate yourself from that and you'll be workign with sumn real hot, i think....


    peep if you would..
    http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread.php?t=957281
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  7. [ Yung Truth ]

    [ Yung Truth ] fuck u, pay me

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    How is my flow AND delivery just like jay-z's ?
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  8. Blues

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    didnt say "just like".............but there's definately a strong influence in there's....not trying to diss or nuthin...i coudl see if i was the only said it..but read some of the other replies,man.....your a nice emcee.......just your style on THIS song in particular is very reminiscent of what Jay does in his style....

    ive heard other tracks of yours where it aint like that at all...just in this 1 track where it's pretty apparent..
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    [ Yung Truth ] fuck u, pay me

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    nigga no disrespect but you sound too much like jay but if thats ya voice then fuck it aside from that the lyrics got to me i see your vison kid you painted a good picture threw your words you chose the right words to develop what you was tryna do keep doin ya thing.....1
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    you've gotten a whole lot better and sound natural as fuck on the mic

    the jay comparison ain't really there anymore, you both flow semi slow but your voices are a good bit different

    pretty good shit overall, if thats a hook at the end the volume needs to be upped a good bit on it, beat sounds madd familiar too
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    ooooooooooohhhhhhhhh
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    Sick-Sense the muthafin ruggratt!

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    Your style is real chill and cocky.. that's cool.. I don't like how you don't rhyme some bars, The lyrics are aight, your flow is decent but I think you could have rode it better, overall I thought this was ok but think you could do a lot better

    Return the luv
    http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread.php?t=958498
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  19. Jaye-R

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    honestly.. i don't really think you sound that much like jay z lol

    maybe because i aint hear your shit from when you first started spitin?

    you got that east coast swagger vibe.. but i dont think it really sounds like jay

    nice lil song right here man

    hit me up
    http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread.php?p=13237070
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