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  1. [ Yung Truth ]

    [ Yung Truth ] fuck u, pay me

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    SEVENBC FUCK YOU PUSSY ASS NIGGA

    www.myspace.com/theindividual

    Drop some honest feedback on this shit right here....Just a lil' verse I wrote today, some shit I been on lately. I need ya'll niggas to see my vision though, see where I'm tryna go with this. Mata fact, click on "Lyrics" and read along, lol...



    peace...
    test
  2. Troll

    Troll New Member

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    This shit was hot no lie. Hadn't peeped you in awhile but you got the flow down to were it sounds straight effortless when you do it. lyrics were def on point. Uppin' this for ya...if it's not already on top
    test
  3. Cheez

    Cheez New Member

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  4. Hibernation

    Hibernation Well-Known Member

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    Yeah This Shits Crazy, I Love Your Style.. Its Obviously Reminiscent Of Jays, But Its Also Got Its Own Flavor As Well
    test
  5. SpoonFull

    SpoonFull Lovely

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    yeah maaaan, this shit was dope. Style is mad smooth....shit is overall niceness. You've gotten a hell of a lot better in the past year man
    test
  6. SHITTY Bang Bang

    SHITTY Bang Bang freestyle fanatic

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    im feeling this yo


    shit is nice and smooth i fucks with it
    test
  7. MagicFX

    MagicFX Idle

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    yo this is tight.. that beat is poppin'..

    flow, what can I say.. it's damn near perfected.. I can't point out any one thing that's foul..

    I know in the past I've made claims that you bite another cats style.. but yo.. that shit is played so bad.. you been doin' you for a while now.. and fact of the matter is.. we all have a voice.. and damn, what to do if we sound like someone else.. anyways..

    I don't see anything wrong with what you are doin' here..

    delivery and emotion sounds good..

    lyrics are nice.. I can tell you feelin' that beat.. you meshed nice with it..

    this is hot.. props to ya man.


    if you get time later...
    http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread.php?t=957071
    test
  8. Pace Beats

    Pace Beats Doesn't Feed The Trolls

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    like this beat. used it... your verse dope.. layed back.. not my style or what i listen to but i have no problem liking something diffrent good shit
    test
  9. C-Money

    C-Money New Member

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    I like your shit dawgie

    Keep It Up
    test
  10. M.Maestro

    M.Maestro Ghost

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    Fuck Truth.
    test
  11. M.Maestro

    M.Maestro Ghost

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    AY u heard me NIGGGA WHEN I SEE U ITS ON NIGGA


    THATS WORD


    WTF NIGGA FUCK U, I PROMISE NIGGA, LOOK OUT YA FUCKIN WINDOW... THATS ME NIGGA Yeah, ON MY SIDEKICK NIGGA WIT MY GOLD RAINCOAT

    COME SEE ME
    test
  12. [ Yung Truth ]

    [ Yung Truth ] fuck u, pay me

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    Girl keep fucking with me you want to.
    test
  13. [ Yung Truth ]

    [ Yung Truth ] fuck u, pay me

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  14. Sever

    Sever Sever that Leash

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    Damn you sound remarkably like Jay-Z, and in my opinion, you are just as hungry as the Blueprint Jay-Z.. The Fonz, lebron line was pretty much accurate from what I hear my main. If the vocals were a little bit higher, and this was professionally mastered, I could bump this.. some bass would help this song too.

    Keep this up man, you have a lot of potential.

    Sorry for the short feed but I couldn't really critique all that much, I was pretty satisfied. 8.5 out of 10.0

    Hey man, also if you would like to please leave some constructive criticism on this older track I want to re-release and master for my new project please do. Thanks in advance, don't stop spittin'
    test
  15. RiggsofHTI

    RiggsofHTI New Member

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  16. Envizioneri

    Envizioneri Gifted n' Prolific

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    yo man.....this is a hot drop right here.....lyrically, it started out fairly simple....
    the fuck silver wear
    and lebron lines were both hard man....good shit there

    flow and delivery solid as well

    nice drop, I'll look for more

    http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread.php?t=957537
    Envizion
    test
  17. Celph Centered

    Celph Centered Detroit's Voice

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    real talk you have gotten better

    RESPECT DUE

    side note... you still gotta find a style that differentiates you from Jay for you end up like Angelous

    -Self
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  18. [ Yung Truth ]

    [ Yung Truth ] fuck u, pay me

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  19. Sick-Sense

    Sick-Sense the muthafin ruggratt!

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    that im really just thinking line was hott.

    fuck it, this was hott.

    keep it up doggy
    test
  20. M.Maestro

    M.Maestro Ghost

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    NIGGA... nigGA FUCK UR MORNING, I HOPE U CHOKED ON TOOTHPASTE NIGGA


    I HOPE U BUST YA ASS ON SOAP IN YA SHOWER U FUCK HEAD



    PUNK OL' BITCH BOY








































    Nice tracks.
    test
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