The Seer

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  1. BlackSoultan Ad Infinitum

    BlackSoultan Ad Infinitum aka Billy Shoreview

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    I hope I'm not violating some sort of posting rule, but these keep showing up. This one was in my dream just now. Idunno WHAT I'm on, yo...


    The Seer

    The Seer

    We dance to the rhythm of dreams
    Different in scheme
    Stuck between the real and
    Reality
    Speak truth through fatality
    Immortality
    Casually saddening
    Finality
    We behold the pale horse
    And
    Evade remorse
    As the perceptions of the day
    Become acquainted in dreams
    Fade into the scenes, I
    Try not to cry, I
    Hit the ground twice
    But can’t not see
    We ask not, want not
    God pours through We
    Stay in dimensional limbo
    He did this to me
    Weeds finish through me
    As a nightmare escapes
    I dare awake, and
    Write where its fate
    Has a light fair gait
    Born of grizzly pate
    Through the dungeons and purgatory
    Fights dared in hate
    We are the prophets of heart
    Emotions abound
    Those are the sounds
    Of the hope filled abound.
    I write because my heart
    Is compelled by it.
    I can’t stop.
    My thoughts are repelled my it.
    I see, feel, hear, taste
    And smell by it.
    Perceive the world with my pen,
    Escape cells by it.
    Stand in the fellowship of men
    And fair angels in bloom
    Angles of whom create
    Infinite space in a room
    Of antiquity
    Time is here, no past or future
    That’s the route through which the soul
    Must pass to suit the
    Needs of understanding
    Demanding sometimes on man
    The
    Capacity to finally see his dreams.
    I remember night scapes
    When I awake and I relate
    To try and make the night awake
    And denial fly away.
    We as poets owe a duty to the world of readers
    Future seers borne through our words as breeders
    We’re the
    Way the heart is heard or seen
    Worst can be the loss of heart’s purity
    We’re the soldiers in the night
    Bearing boulders of light
    On Shoulders of might
    With the Onus to write
    Verbal Onanism
    Sinful if we spill forth our wisdom
    Never to be read, never to be heard or forgiven
    Speak, fair poet, youthful muses and scribes
    You can ignite your youthfulness through truthful delight.
    Shout down, vintage sage. Speak once through your eyes
    Give us the might of wisdom from your decades of site.
    This is the right and true path of the poet and seer
    Who holds a power and a burden through the purpose so clear.
    test
  2. Mind~$oul

    Mind~$oul I'm Pretty

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    "We as poets owe a duty to the world of readers
    Future seers borne through our words as breeders
    We’re the
    Way the heart is heard or seen
    Worst can be the loss of heart’s purity
    We’re the soldiers in the night
    Bearing boulders of light
    On Shoulders of might
    With the Onus to write
    Verbal Onanism
    Sinful if we spill forth our wisdom
    Never to be read, never to be heard or forgiven
    Speak, fair poet, youthful muses and scribes
    You can ignite your youthfulness through truthful delight.
    Shout down, vintage sage. Speak once through your eyes
    Give us the might of wisdom from your decades of site.
    This is the right and true path of the poet and seer
    Who holds a power and a burden through the purpose so clear."

    Damn you killed it right there. That was the illest shit i've seen in a minute and it had to be by you. Damn soultan you elevate everytime you post something. Imagery, the wordplay, structure everything was on point. Shit you need to keep dreaming

    one luv
    test
  3. Feme Sole

    Feme Sole Mrs. _Evil

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    poetry is pumping like mad out of those lil veins of yours man......DAMN......can i borrow your muse for a few days? lol


    I agree with Mind $oul.....When I read your pieces I can hear them, and thats important......I would LOVE to hear you perform seriously cause i know you would rip shit.....

    loved the lines mind soul quoted, also the first lines and this one "Perceive the world with my pen,. . ."
    test
  4. TuNed RooT

    TuNed RooT Love is introduction ..

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    Yes, as they said, all of your pieces speak out to me, but I'd enjoy hearing one from you in a Spoken Word live performance. Other than that, I must agree with Mind-Soul in saying that you elevate with every masterpiece you lay out for us to read and search the true meaning of. This is a wonderful joint, family. How you could wake up from your dream and write such a beautiful piece of work, such as this is beyond me. Great job.. My blessings..
    test
  5. lpoet

    lpoet POET

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    wow....i really dont know what to say?

    this was simply amazing...from top to bottom.....a great piece.....loved everything about it.....had so much in it.....lovin your pieces of late...

    God pours through We
    Stay in dimensional limbo
    He did this to me

    liked that line as well along with many many others....

    keep it up......
    test
  6. BlackSoultan Ad Infinitum

    BlackSoultan Ad Infinitum aka Billy Shoreview

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    Thanks, y'all. These words mean a lot to me.
    test
  7. BlackSoultan Ad Infinitum

    BlackSoultan Ad Infinitum aka Billy Shoreview

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    I wanted to make relevent the following statement, so I figured I'd post it here.

    this poem and my other recent ones (along with old ones)

    were put on my new poetry site:

    http://blacksoultan2.tripod.com/contents2.html

    and the old one is

    http://blacksoultan2.tripod.com/contents.html

    Including this one I rediscovered. I wrote this to my girl last year:

    I'll Find You Again


    Our parents viewed the sun differently.
    I hope you remember me
    Lost in a memory
    Dreaming only of senses not known to the six
    Cold winter mixes with the warmth of your lips
    Lost
    In
    A
    Dream.

    I appease my discomfort and impatience with a word
    Traced on the transparent film of my imagination
    I catch fire, eradicating memories
    Not remembered
    Facing the way life seems to be
    Afraid of the way it needs to be
    Scared of what life means to me.
    You and I means I am no longer alone.
    Your life means I no longer enjoy it.
    And

    Yet I
    Si
    t.
    Lacking sleep, lacking breath.
    Lacking desire to take another step
    But for the desire to find you again.
    But for the desire to love you my friend.
    If life were to end, I would turn back time
    To be with you again,
    Your lips adjacent to mine
    The curl at the side of your mouth
    That only you posess
    Holds me at night.
    Keeps me calm in the fright.
    I want you there with me
    To view the sun.
    Renew the love
    That I knew at once.

    I’ll find you again
    First thing in the morning.
    First dream of me longing
    First sign of me calming
    I will find you

    Again…

    Thanks for the love again, y'all.
    test
  8. Novaman: RaWKiLLa

    Novaman: RaWKiLLa New Member

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    I was really feeling this. This peice right here is a classic. Tight...really really tight.
    test
  9. BlackSoultan Ad Infinitum

    BlackSoultan Ad Infinitum aka Billy Shoreview

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    Thanks, yo. That means a lot.

    Love the sig.
    test
  10. very nice, great flow throughout, was fresh and thought provoking

    latez
    test
  11. BlackSoultan Ad Infinitum

    BlackSoultan Ad Infinitum aka Billy Shoreview

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    Wow, thanks y'all.

    I think I'm going to take a slight break of posting. I don't want to spread myself too thin.
    test
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