~The Paint Brush~

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  1. Mind~$oul

    Mind~$oul I'm Pretty

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    Forever never came
    and I was left stranded
    trying to place the pieces
    of your habit...

    she jumped into an endless blue
    to drown in her insecurities
    and as I stood on the edge
    I saw her outstrecthed hand
    perphaps for me to save her
    or for her to only pull me in

    they say love no longer exist
    and we're all fools holding
    on to a last wish...
    I battled in the trenches...
    trying to secure our future
    but forgot about the present
    and how your shattered past
    still played a clear imagine...
    unsure what to make of it
    one foot in and the other
    half-stepping...
    you tight-roped with such balance
    and cut into my heart
    with such precision...
    it's a cold way to play
    and i'm left trying to fix it...

    forever never came
    and I was left
    picking up the last pieces of me
    catching tears out of pure dignity...

    she was my god, that wanted desstance
    confused by idealistic thoughts
    weakened by realities hardships...
    she fell in love at the site of the flower
    before she ever got the chance to smell it...
    love is a war you wont win
    unless you're willing to understand
    and she wasn't ready to take
    another chance, to perphaps
    scar her skin again...
    so she left me waiting for
    forever that never came...
    and my heart is gone,
    no longer youthful and free...
    but jagged and weary
    intelligence gave way
    to naive imagery...
    and we ran amuck
    chasing endless nothings...

    only you kept your rearview,
    hidden from me...




    First thing I wrote (key'd actually) in some months. What's up realm? Good to be back after so long.
    test
  2. Nasty__Ness

    Nasty__Ness The Queen of Topicals

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    I can really appreciate this piece. I've been there before, therefore, I loved it!
    test
  3. allnakey

    allnakey Sex is no fun by yourself

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    You sound like a whining little bitch in this piece. Lol nah man what's been good. Been a while for me too about 2 years. Anyways an emotion filled piece. I love that one repeated line just seemed perfect for the piece. Well good read man. I might be around for a little bit.
    test
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