The One (This is more of an r&b song so if you can critique it with that in mind thx)

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  1. Predator INC

    Predator INC New Member

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    i wrote this for a girl who im feelin who gave herself to only one person and held him down while he was in the joint and he cheated on her right when he got out.


    you can have all the riches
    you can have all the material things
    but what does it mean without love
    cuz u cant buy away the pain
    you can have all the strangers
    but it doesnt ammount to the one
    wake up alone in the mornin
    only to find they face is gone


    i been talkin to you for some time now
    tryna make up my mind what i should do
    cuz ya man he did you so wrong
    and theres alotta thangs u been through 4
    and i dont wanna place no pressure
    but girl you can do so much better
    with a man cares and understand ya
    i think that that would last forever 8
    spendin nights with a bed space empty
    knowin that you cant ever let him back
    girl just think of it like new beginnings
    cuz ill give u all you never had 12
    but i aint tryin to be a replacement
    so if you need time we can take it
    i know your life needs rearrangin
    ill help you not be scared to make the changes cuz 16


    you can have all the riches
    you can have all the material things
    but what does it mean without love
    cuz u cant buy away the pain
    you can have all the strangers
    but it doesnt ammount to the one
    wake up alone in the mornin
    only to find they face is gone


    you could be drivin in that lambo
    doin a hundred on three eighty
    but what does it mean if you all alone
    without a good man to give to safety 4
    to spice up ya life when its borin
    to wipe away tears when ya cryin
    ill be there when ya need me for ya
    im true and ya know i aint lyin 8
    see girl you got the shape of goddess
    plus a spirit thatll warm the hardest heart
    but too many just lookin atcha body
    they keep they intentions in the dark 12
    recognize that im all grown
    and only man can know a woman
    now you aint gotta be alone
    so just forget all them boys they was crooked 16






    i know what ya worth like alicia
    and i see you for only you
    now i know you feelin all torn now
    but when you doin me you doin you 4
    most people cant get the big picture
    they only see life in shades of grey
    but id give u the moon if i was witcha
    but girl i wont force you sto stay 8
    ill be there when times gettin tough
    ill be there when ya spirits down
    ill be there when u cant take no more
    and when ya need help workin it out 12
    see thats definition of a man
    always stayin by his girls side
    and he knows how to be loyal
    and for his number one he gonna ride 16
    test
  2. AtomAnt

    AtomAnt New Member

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    This is a beautiful tune bruh. All that is needed now is the instrumentals with the beats
    test
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