The Omgea and Alpha

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  1. Coup d'état

    Coup d'état Don't believe the hype

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    And so I look up to the stars
    And each cluster represents arbitrary patterns
    Some of nostalgia in a spiritual place
    Where the past, present and future collide
    And some of the representation of infinity
    Where the limits of thought know no boundaries
    And how such visions open the doors
    To an abundance of tests, quizzing in absolute
    Underscored by audacity, to dream of a better way
    Or a future fulfillment open to all that acknowledge this
    And as such, an urgency to realize this spawns
    From the direct violation of societal obligations
    Some are struck be these stars directly
    Like a electric current exiting the truth in humanity
    A wise man will remember these images, realizations
    And paint on their spiritual canvas, a map
    A step by step mission statement rising organically
    A fool will pass away with the next morning and wake
    Into the same mental imprisonment, boxed in
    Into the status quo of cheap talk and false ideologies
    They will wither

    It is in this personal struggle of our spiritual state
    That the award to those who capitalize on opportunity
    Cross over the line of cheap living and into eternity
    Of everlasting Paradise set by the willingness to accept
    That there is only one truth in that we realize the impossible

    Impossible is a limitation set by learned behavior
    And if one could forget this conditioning and look
    We would see the patterns in the stars in a new way
    Reborn in a sense that a personal intuition will decide
    What is important to the soul and what is merely a trend
    Worn on the sleeves of flesh



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  2. Coup d'état

    Coup d'état Don't believe the hype

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    I'm trying to fall away from pride. That said, can I get some thoughts, critique or more importantly, your interpretation of the above ?

    thanks my fellow writers.
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  3. the omega man

    the omega man so, it goes

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    First off I want a royalty check for using my name in your title.


    Ok here goes....some people break the cycle and become their own original self with no worries of what others think, and that is a good thing because the wise will utilize this vast endless opportunity to be themselves and let that joy fill them.


    I like this line, "impossible is a limitation set by learned behavior" sounds like a famous quote from someone famous...good shit


    I like the way you've poetically explored this topic. Also you claim that this has something to do with your pride. Since you said that I can agree that pride probably stems from the fact that other people and society exist. How could someone be proud if they did not have societal foundations from which to measure?

    Good story, not as deep as I am use to from you, though. I still like the booby poem!
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  4. Coup d'état

    Coup d'état Don't believe the hype

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    Thanks dawg. Pride measured in a spiritual sense which is not measured by the limitations bound in society

    get back in the rstl
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