~The Mirror Argument~

Discussion in 'Poetry Realm' started by Mind~$oul, May 10, 2005.

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  1. Åffliction

    Åffliction :::::::::::::::::::::

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    I liked this read alot.


    I've been there before...
    the grudge matches with lonely poets
    who questioned my soul...
    back against the walls
    teasing the tightropes...
    the devil's greatest creation
    isnt the sci-fi channels...
    or some silly UFO's
    the greatest deception is fearing
    what you don't know...


    Real nice job.
    test
  2. KingCzar

    KingCzar New Member

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    Indeed I have to follow suit on this one. True Poetry right there.
    test
  3. absolute zero

    absolute zero Among the living

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    My bad for not bein around everybody.

    Instant vintage for you Soul, creative, imagery was everywhere. I could sense it. Every piece you write gives off this vibe, that's almost unexplainable. The only thing I can think of when I read it, the vibe and all.......it's just....the slums, the underdog.....Love it.

    "back against the walls
    teasing the tightropes...
    the devil's greatest creation
    isnt the sci-fi channels...
    or some silly UFO's
    the greatest deception is fearing
    what you don't know..."

    ^^^yeah.....

    God Bless
    test
  4. Dex P. LaMorte

    Dex P. LaMorte New Member

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    this was dope man.

    you, feme and a few others are the only poets here I actually enjoy reading.

    apologies for not giving you feedback sooner.

    and thanks for reading my deranged, fucked up ass poetry and not hitting me with the goth label.
    test
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