The meaning of Life is LOVE

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  1. UFO the Phoenix

    UFO the Phoenix I DONT BELIEVE IN ALIENS!

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    POEM WITH AUDIO....MP3 can be found on my website:

    http://www.soundclick.com/bands/0/spaceangelmusic.htm




    ~THE MEANING OF LIFE IS LOVE~


    HI:

    http://www.soundclick.com/util/streamM3U.m3u?ID=374782&q=Hi



    We first met on the Internet – Just login and chat
    Never knew we take it to the next step
    Like Romeo And Juliet
    Running around the town like newly weds’
    Now All I do in Bed is sit and reminisce
    …On how our tongue would do tricks
    I remember not saying anything serious –Just some ish’
    And Mysteriously before I could finish my sentence
    You make the first move from the offense
    Caught me off guard with those soft lips
    Such a sudden Bliss – Of happiness
    I wont forget – Nor Regret – That first tender kiss
    Across my virgin lips you left wet – with your passion trip
    I gasp and slip deeper into the abyss
    Our hearts connect for an instant the world we eclipse
    Letting this relationship cast a shadow
    On the mindless babble
    It’s a timeless travel
    When we collide to battle
    For the Heart and Love, Body and Soul
    We start to rub going out of control
    I dunno why??? But you make me feel whole
    The missing puzzle in my life
    As we connect and Hold
    Shy yet Bold staring into my eyes
    Reading my mind – catching me by surprise
    Spending all night together waiting for the sun-rise
    Now those were fun times
    Never did we once cry
    Until we had to say goodbye doing a stunts dive
    Into thee unknown future
    With that one fear to loose her
    Had to go our own ways
    Today we communicate threw computers
    Technology rooted us in this new age era
    Now Separation Anxiety is my front-page terror
    Wondering will this long distance relationship last forever
    I tell the man in the mirror
    That there’s other fish in the river
    But no matter where I stand and deliver
    I still wish I was with HER
    Again I reminisce and remember…
    This time staring at pictures
    Laughter tickles my soul right into the center
    I let the thoughts linger
    A little while inside my memory void
    I’ve been with girls before
    But never experience this type of Joy
    Oh Boy this Love Toy
    Is playing with my emotions
    Connecting like the sunset hiding behind thee ocean
    I know I’m not the only person boastin’
    On this spoken word
    I’m drunk off that love potion nine
    Coming out to find the meaning of life
    Soon I’ll be needing a wife
    And I have this Angel in mind
    But I guess we’ll see in due time
    As we follow our destiny down a divine design
    Wish I could rewind
    Back to when we first combine and made each others spines-melt
    No Sex just Complex Spiritual Help
    But somehow our relationship tilt
    Now never have I ever felt
    So alone – unplugged – and ejected
    My one love rejected – so unexpected
    I feel neglected – Virus Collected – Inside infected
    I feel DEAD – Resurrected – Yet Still Defected
    I feel empty – Selected to remain transparent
    Why oh why do I feel so naked
    Those exposed feelings turning all hectic
    Now I truly know what Adam and Eve reflected
    No longer whole, Heart and Soul disconnected
    I cant breath-in full oxygen
    Strolling with the wind confused
    Missing my rib that GOD took from me to make YOU
    I guess its true
    The meaning of life is LOVE
    As I continue to read and write these blues
    Using my gift from Above…………………..
    test
  2. Cigma

    Cigma Maxwell's Demon

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    lovely flow and progression...the way it played in my mind anyway, didn't peep the audio...another time. peace.
    test
  3. TuNed RooT

    TuNed RooT Love is introduction ..

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    I'll be doing this as well on Sunday, probably and sharing it with all ya'll. I'll be recording a couple tracks of my own Mixtape, so I'll add a couple Spoken Word poetic pieces on there, as well. Other than that, this was pretty decent. When you're doing more of a poetry piece, try and not to talk so fast, because you need to dwell upon it. Sometimes you talk a little too fast, so if I hadn't had the lyrics, I wouldn't be able to sulk it all up. This was very deep and revealing though, told a story of what the meaning of love was to you, yourself. My blessings..
    test
  4. lpoet

    lpoet POET

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    this was dope....flow was def on point......might check the audio latter.....but i'm at work...and the speakers be fuckin up...


    for some reason i really liked this line

    Shy yet Bold staring into my eyes

    duno why

    nice piece

    UP
    test
  5. *GeMiNeYeZ*

    *GeMiNeYeZ* ~§¤Sweet Shinobi¤§~

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    i listened to the audio with my eyes closed before i read the poem... its like... it spoke to me... i'm lost for words... great job...
    test
  6. UFO the Phoenix

    UFO the Phoenix I DONT BELIEVE IN ALIENS!

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    hey thanks for the feedback ya'll

    it means alot to me....good and bad it all just makes me better

    I respone to your poems as well

    PEACE AND GODBLESS












    ^up^
    test
  7. UFO the Phoenix

    UFO the Phoenix I DONT BELIEVE IN ALIENS!

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    can I get some more feedback on this poem

    wont be making another one for awhile

    drop your links if you want me to respone to your poem

    thanks
    test
  8. skandelous_lala

    skandelous_lala back from the dead

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    that was beautifully written..i was really really feeling that

    "Strolling with the wind confused
    Missing my rib that GOD took from me to make YOU
    I guess its true
    The meaning of life is LOVE"

    loved that part@! awesome
    test
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