The Manhunter

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  1. Mrjdm998

    Mrjdm998 New Member

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    Whether it's slicing a swat team or crushing a crack fiend
    Murdering has become just a part of my daily routine
    Swinging swords, switchblades and shooting a shotgun
    This verse is coming from the heart even though I ain't got one
    Experiance with needles makes a Dr House look like a Dr Phil
    Teach a chef a thing or two when their ribs are chopped'n'grilled
    Stalk a helpless victim before making a neck incision with precision
    As long as your in my vision blades are ready to get swishing
    After throwing them to the floor start to rev up the chainsaw
    Take off the head'n'legs like getting a bed through a door
    Follow up the blood and slicing with a helping of gore
    One moment there's one body plant explosives and you can C4
    After the kill kidnap a nurse and perform something that's perverse
    Give your girl forced multis like a generic underground rap verse
    Dispose of the body under her lawn and six feet of wet dirt
    Anybody who comes out their house at that point gets hurt

    They call me the Manhunter killer in the mist
    Moment I see red introduce a face to my fist
    Torture techniques dominate my bucket list
    If I ain't an expert in a weapon it must not exist

    Blades are now rusted from how many times they've been thrusted
    Write 'cus beats are like court apointed lawyers they can't do me justice
    Beat on a heart until it's exploded and busted
    Even Hannibal Lector left he was so damn disgusted
    Don't bother with drag races just run down walkers during night
    In a broken down pick-up truck with no working lights
    Cocktail of choice is the classic molotov
    Share it with the skinny girls I've kidnapped you won't believe the pounds they've burnt off
    Drivin' insane locked in the trunk of a stolen car
    Play with words 'cus all my game discs have been shapen into ninja stars
    Listen to Heltah Skeltah while reading Catcher in the Rye
    If victims are still alive can't give descriptions I'm a snatcher of their eyes
    Have a monopoly on the market Voorhees and Kruger need government welfare
    Cops want to give off a distress signal so I shoot them with a flare
    If they can't catch a grenade soon won't be able to catch a breath
    Give me one chance to kill you I'll soon snatch the rest

    They call me the Manhunter killer in the mist
    Moment I see red introduce a face to my fist
    Torture techniques dominate my bucket list
    If I ain't an expert in a weapon it must not exist
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  2. IAmBenT

    IAmBenT Eat a dick, faggot

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    Give your girl forced multis like a generic underground rap verse
    that was hilarious

    Listen to Heltah Skeltah while reading Catcher in the Rye - wtf I hate that book lol

    Play with words 'cus all my game discs have been shapen into ninja stars
    this line was legendary lol

    overall this was really cool, just flat out wicked killer shit, with a pretty intricate chorus and real creative wording. dope!
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  3. Chase Murda

    Chase Murda hostile enviroment

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    Aight aight ...
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  4. Mrjdm998

    Mrjdm998 New Member

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  5. nO gOoD!

    nO gOoD! Life Music :: Press Play

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    This was pretty nice. Some great lines and flow was on point. Good drop check out mine called "said and done"
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  6. the omega man

    the omega man so, it goes

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    Good lines here and there. I like the second verse more....some lines I think I could have done without and those are the ones that didn't have good matching end rhymes...a lot of masculine rhyme and not enough feminine rhyme

    However, the content of your lines were really thought out and you get an A for originallity and cleverness
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