THE MAIN EVENT ROUNDS 1-3: Deth to G force!

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  1. DethStryque

    DethStryque DethStryque theInvincible

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    VOTE ON THE MAIN EVENT ROUNDS 1-3: Deth to G force!

    Sorry for the delay guys.Promise not to do that mess anymore,I've smoothed out the issues causing my most egregious delays. I'm reposting Round 1 here and dropping round 2 in bout 1-2 days. Yo,T.A.C.,this won't take forever to be done.I'll be catching GFORCE on FB and we'll proceed apace.I expect this battle to be fully resolved quite soon.Thanks.
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  2. DethStryque

    DethStryque DethStryque theInvincible

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    G FORCE ROUND 1

    Ok geeze, i guess i'll go first..here's my first 48 bars...


    Words are parrow when ya locked-in by poison arrows dipped in toxin
    They thought Deth 'n' G Force are the same! So how you gonna win like shadow boxing?
    Attacks will tame when i HACK 'N' MAIN like a ''demented computer virus''
    Get stomped dead, WE'RE ALL SICK OF YOUR LONG THREADS WITH VIEW TO TIRE US
    My strong head will leave you whomped, I shred with every song said
    Coz i'm BLOWING UP YOUR CYCLE just like i BOMBED PEDS
    I'll make his THONG RED coz I RIP THIS PUSSY, leaving TONGS RED
    Get gassed like bong heads or Jews during the holocaust
    His style is BORROWED 'N' TOST coz YOU ESSAY/U.S.A with EVERY DOLLA LOST
    Holla! I'm the boss, your in the slow lane making no gain
    These flows rain, smashing up your nose 'n' brain like taking cocaine
    I bring snow to maim, froze his frame with these pros that reign
    Its true believe me, ''smash your head thru a TV'', bringing you CLOSE TO FAME
    Just like CLOTHES TO DAMES this battle will COST YOU AN ARM & A LEG!!!!!
    Dropping psalms on the reg that bring harm so you beg
    Coz i HIT YOU WITH SO MANY SHELLS its like i'm ''farming eggs''
    These sonnets cook coz i bring heat to leave comets shook
    Dethstrike IS A LADY FROM X-MEN, so all you get is COMIC LOOKS
    Yeah, your just a cartoon! Punches ''hit so hard'' they leave you on a FAR MOON
    These bars are harpoons that ''rip your tongue'' like BARBED SPOONS
    I'm masked doom like MF! You get ''swept away'' like FAST BROOMS
    Death could never ''be fresh'', EVEN IF HE SLEPT IN BATHROOMS
    Just like GUITAR TUNES your sure to get ''strung out''......
    DEATH WASTES TIME BATTLING KIDS COZ HE LIKES TO HEAR YOUNG SHOUTS
    This tongue clouts in fun bouts coz i bring tones 'a' raps to plunder chaps
    My brains raw! I'll ''chop you with a chainsaw'' like LUMBERJACKS
    This lame bores aims floored, he should have stayed under wraps
    These ''lightning shots'' get such a ''round of applause'', even THUNDER CLAPS!!!
    Bringing more heat with the war speech, causing the sun to crack
    Death is getting ''SON'd''! He should have brought his MUM to rap!
    Only just begun the attack! My punches hit the chin sleeker....
    Coz i'm DEATH'S OWN WORST ENEMY like the GRIM REAPER
    His guise is fraught, this guys a fraud, you can't spitt ish to thee
    You from Cali? He should get the LIES AWARD, you sound more BRITISH THAN ME!
    Yeah we've seen you dude on Youtube, what you trying to prove?
    Be concerned i'll ouste when i BURN YOUR HOUSE, so your ''dieing to move''
    Now your urns with spouse! We might be friends but i turn 'n' pounce
    ITS SAD YOU RELY ON THE R.B.L JUST TO EARN AMOUNTS!!!
    If ''sperm counts'' then your sure to lose, coz its a ''white wash'', submit!
    Get Tai-boshed quick! I'll leave your ''head banging'' like MOSH PITS!
    Deaths not sick, he's drop kicked! G Force is faster than fibre optics with topics
    I'll EAT 'N' FRY beat this guy like a CHINESE MAN WITH CHOPSTICKS
    Call the ''cops quick''! Coz this guy sure needs A REST / ARREST
    Even with a LOCKSMITH he could not ''break these bars'', i'm the best!
    I suggest you regress! Deth is getting SCHOOLED like a RETEST
    Deth poses weak threats in those vids where he poses with cheap vests
    I'm in a different class don't trip , leaving you tarred 'n' ripped with bars on tip
    He's 'past it'! His future is death like kids in the GAZA STRIP


    DETH ROUND 1

    Deth to gforce

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    This weak dork Geek force is so souped he leaked borscht!
    Toldja be-fore...speak war n gitcha meat scorched!
    I'll roll on you like a 3-door elite Porsche.Re-tort with the street torch
    Float G north on the sea shore after I chop n stick him like sweet pork!
    All your multis are gee...FORCED!! My songs duh monsta grabbin mics n transformin like Beast Wars! [1]
    Punches gitcha bean warped,teeth torqued n soared to
    far away lands like the Peace Corps!!
    Bitch I'll swing swords with obscene force til ya bleed quarts from three-fourths
    of ya dweeb corpse!!
    Cream dwarfs like G-force! My speech scorch like blammin cannons
    You'll git ate like a veal meal course fed to a man from a land of famine!
    I plan tuh plant him when I jab his abs n slam n hook him like snaggin
    salmon!!
    G-force beefin? I'll CAN OF SPAM him! Revive his spirit...then damn
    his phantom!!
    When I rap I'm spazzin hack n slash him like the Manson fam n their
    manic stabbin!
    Battlin me is like showing pictures of you mooning people...cuz
    THAT'S YO ASS N
    I'll slang flames in massive blasts n torch Gforce's corpse tuh ash n
    My ass was laughin...
    ...When you bagged ya diseased hag's vag n got BURNING BALLS
    like the NADS OF DRAGONS!
    Clap the Magnum...n rock ya gear wit rockets that sky ya like The Rocketeer
    Like eyebrows I top ya tier//tear,ock it's clear...you can't see me
    like you gotcha optics sheared!
    Plus these Glock tips here? Spreads ya thoughts planetwide like
    the blogosphere
    I gotcha mom's poon smacked n stay on her head like coon hats on
    Davey Crocket's ears [2]
    Deth's the Chocolateer Cause of Fear! When I cock the spear I'll do you wrong!
    And overrun you British pale faces like my brothers did in ZULU DAWN!!
    Battle me? Git boo-boo'd on! Like herbologists I'll blend this herb!
    That wakk fuck Gforce is gassed up? I'll light his ass up like THE HINDENBURG [3]
    I'm sendin words with Princeton verve! Watch me bust like I got some nookie!!
    I'll break you up like flotsam rookie! Cuz you'z a rat and a skunk constantly gettin fucked...POSSUM PUSSY!
    I'll knuckle ya noggin but I ain't talkin noogies!! Out rap me coward? You lack thee power!!
    I read ya verse...that joint can't fade me like Amish bars during
    Happy Hour!!
    I'll send shells to ya mouth like clam beef chowder n savagely manhandle ya free
    You got
    Quote:
    Originally Posted by G Force
    strong head

    Really? Your prison buddies all agree! UNANIMOUSLY!
    Gforce? Winnin? YOU CAN'T AGAINST ME!! Stand against me git dismantled with ease!
    Gorce you "screwball"! When I go hard one bat crack uh make ya skull go yard cuz I'm the Black Mickey Mantle with free's!! [4]


    [1] http://youtu.be/iynaVG4icew

    [2] Davey Crockett's raccoon hat http://watchingshadowsonthewall.files.wordpress.com/2010/03/davycrockettlogo16704.jpeg

    [3] The Hindenburg Disaster :http://youtu.be/lFptgQ8GA_U

    [4] "screwball" is not only calling someone crazy or stupid but of course it's a baseball pitch infamous for its screwy torque and difficulty to hit,"going yard" is baseball slang for hitting a home run or grand slam
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  3. DethStryque

    DethStryque DethStryque theInvincible

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    The main event: Deth to gforce r.2

    You rap wakk bars like: "spit ish to thee" like ya script is sweet? You pompous bitch
    If you're on beast mode my monstrous fists uh somersault you like Blanka flips! [1]
    Your hottest scripts is ignonimous! My drops is sicc like they're vomitous!
    My talks uh shit on your bombest spit like my tonsils git incontinence! [2]
    You'll git conquered quick if you box with this rocket launchin esophagus
    My softest hits rips ya rawest diss til you're history like Herodotus! [3]
    Lift the rod with clips that make ya chest sag like ya momma's tits
    Battle Deth? You ain't survivin like a suicide dive in pirhana pits
    Ya raps git merked in a massacre worse than Rwanda's is!
    My punches swell up your mouth like Rihanna's lips n twist ya top like Snapple caps
    I ain't He-Man...but I leave a Castle of Gray Skulls behind when I ride on battle kats//Battle Cats! [4]
    Eatcha average raps like sammich snacks! Everything you drop is soft!
    I'll break ya spine,paralyze ya...call you "lazy" and make you walk it off!!
    I'll cop a squat n drop a log atop ya dawg! My blazin rhymin
    Sends ya brains a-flyin like I raped ya face with Satan's trident!
    My phrasin's violent n gitcha played camp straight stamped like the face of Tyson
    Competitors get murked cuz like predators in church...I prey in silence
    G-Force? I'll slay this gaijin with blades dividin his face like a ragin ninja Gaiden[5]
    Say good-bye when...I drag a saw across ya throat like I'm playin violins!
    I spit music to the sound of bangin iron blazin fire n clangin sirens!
    G-FORCE won't get SON'd he'll get SIRE'd when punches ring his bell fast//Belfast like Ireland!!
    My flyer hymns expire men with powered lead that flays marks quicker!
    Now ya naked wet n faded like ya shower head sprayed hard liquor
    Fillet starch splinter hearts n livers like I launched a spear through you!!
    G-Force's rhymes are sheer booboo but I bring savage heat n magic beef like steer voodoo!!
    I'll take off on you like Lears do dude with punches that fade you like beer brew do
    It ain't a compliment when I say that your hock n spit is equivalent to ear poo-poo
    My heat is CRAZY.Sheer koo-koo! I'm bakin Force like bacon pork
    I'll make him stand before my bars then sentence him like a day in court!
    Then punch til his ears're HELLA RINGIN like DOORBELLS ON SATAN'S PORCH
    Blazin forth phrasin morphed tuh Agent Orange! G-Force kain't handle me!
    If you're a beast? I'm VAN HELSING. If you're G-Force? I'm anti-gravity! [6]
    My canned heat savagely puts holes in your teeth like candy cavities!
    This pansy maggot G's another casualty! I'll make him bleed n things quick!
    Yall gather round as I kill a clown//killa clown like STEPHEN KING'S "IT" [7]
    Run up git tomahawked Molotv'd bombed n chalked for poppin off
    Keep talkin raw n hostile dawg? I'll stomp ya ass n rocket blast til ya fossil's ash! PROBLEM SOLVED!
    You said I'm an X-MAN? I'll lift clips up like BISHOP and klikk-bukk when ya face me [8]
    Your name is G FORCE...so you bit that cheesy cartoon from the 80's! [9]
    So when ya diss my name G tryin tuh fade me? You'll still gitcha meat scorched!
    Cuz in rap AND cartoons Deth the X-MAN is a better success than G-FORCE

    [1] BLANKA FLIPS http://youtu.be/aS0D_pzH9fA

    [2] INCONTINENCEIncontinent | Define Incontinent at Dictionary.com

    [3] Herodotus http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Herodotus

    [4] HE-MAN,CASTLE OF GRAY SKULL,BATTLE CAT http://youtu.be/7yeA7a0uS3A

    [5] NINJA GAIDEN http://youtu.be/r-eNpoHDZGI

    [6] VAN HELSING YouTube - Van Helsing

    [7] KILL A CLOWN/KILLA CLOWN LIKE STEPHEN KING'S "IT" YouTube - Scariest Movie Villains: Pennywise the Clown

    [8] BISHOP THE X-MAN http://youtu.be/Rs5qmdhLUMw

    [9] G-FORCE/CHEESY CARTOON FROM THE 80'S: YouTube - Battle of the Planets intro (high DVD quality)
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  4. G Force

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    Aha! That Belfast line was your best line i reckon although i already have a glaring flip for it which you shall see shortly. I'll have both my next two verses up in the week...most of it is already written, i just have about 20 bars left to do, i'll get it done one evening and post both verses together.
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  5. DethStryque

    DethStryque DethStryque theInvincible

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    word up let's get this jumpin,but that Belfast line wasn't the illest.It was a cold punch but you must've slept on many bars I dropped if you rated that one the best ar.Lol.
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    G FORCE - VERSE 2!


    I'll leave your frees torched! Get ''killed in the field'' like WHEAT SCORCHED
    Speak war? Your weak scrawls ''lack firewpower'' like a PEACE FORCE
    In street brawls G puts an ''end to Deth'' but without the REMORSE
    My G Force blows you away with ease of course like a HURRICANE TO A CHEAP PORCH
    Your just breeze - talk! I'll beat you in your country & drain every resource
    Coz everything i spitt is TOXIC like BP OIL SPILLS ON YOUR BEACH SHORES
    Meat whore, sweet pork, three fourths, dweeb corpse, might as well write ''SEA HORSE''
    My multies forced? The point is, you just wrote anything that rhymes with G FORCE!!!
    I'll retort his complexion! G Force is the reason you have light tanned skin!!
    Get slammed, binned! If you actually watched ZULU you'd know the WHITE MAN WINS!
    Smack ya tooth freak, so much blood runs from ya head like a roof leak
    Lets truth seek! What i wrote in 2 hours took this true geek OVER TWO WEEKS
    This made a few speak! Peeps were like: ''Oh, Deth's so poor he needs a rest''
    NEWS FLASH! YOUR ATTEMPTS FAILED TO BORE ME TO DEATH!!!! (yawns)
    Bad luck, leave me ''gassed up'' like The Hidenburg? Are you factually certain?
    I'll draw the curtain! That punch might work if i was ACTUALLY GERMAN!!
    G Force blows you up in the urban like a TERRORIST WITH A TURBAN
    This person worsens! Its certain his punches have trajectory of lost aliens
    He called me ''POSSUM pussy''! Again..that might work if i was AUSTRALIAN
    Your a wacky coward! I'll hit you with more lead than IRAQI SHOWERS
    When Deth attacks he cowars coz man, its YOU that lacks thee power!
    Amish bars? LMAO, I'll ''DOWN YOU QUICK'' like Britts during HAPPY HOUR!!!!
    I show enough prime to give you a tough time when i chuck rhymes

    You implied i give ''strong head''! Dude, it seems to most YOU SUCK MINE!!!!
    Shock ya fear, get ya optics cleared, i top tiers like The Rock appeared after lost years
    Hock in ya ear! This fake-soft takes off like Rocketeer, now he drops just HERE!!
    His fist just missed, i'll twist your wrist! G Force has been ill since a chrysalis
    Its concerning all, Deth can't ''take the piss''! He's got BURNING BALLS like SYPHILIS
    Your dire plans expire and leave you in the mire, blammed when my fire lands
    I'll invade your entire land like folks did back in the days from Ireland
    Everything you shoot makes my skin harden. I ain't hearing what you bring, pardon!
    Compared to G! Your just a small drop in the ocean like Bin Laden
    I'll down your bars quicker than hard liquor with fast viguor when i rhyme hard
    Your running out of time spa! All can tell DETH lacks the SPIRIT like wine bars
    Defeat you in just nine bars like pub crawls / these lyrics snub scrawls
    You mentioned HE-MAN! Well then i'm LIONO, your just cub brawls
    Don't test me when my mood stinks, it baffles me the way this dude thinks
    ITS FUNNY YOU HAVE TO EXPLAIN YOUR LINES BY POSTING YOUTUBE LINKS!!
    He's expelled, binned! I'll leave you with a swelled chin when the bell rings
    If Deth was a ''heavy metal band on tour'', he couldn't make a VAN ''HELL SING''
    This man takes a belting! Delivering punches with such speed, hands are swelting
    Force brings so much heat, even Deth's ''fans'' can't stop him melting
    Force has power of raging bisons / I'll bite your ear off like the discrace of Tyson
    Say goodbye son! Deth preys in silence like the last days of tyrants
    My bars sting! Punches hit your stomache, leaving you with a sour taste like fasting
    Deth's the past like his last win! I'll use your rib cage as harp strings
    Use my throat as violins? I'll rip yours with a big saw so he can't even sing
    Deth win? He's dreaming 'counting sheep' .....
    I SILENCE LAMBS with violent hands like STEPHEN KING!!!!


    My last verse will be up very shortly!
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    G FORCE - VERSE 3!

    Deth lacks the VITAL SPRAYS, he can't stack the keys to harm me
    He can't ''move crowds'', I'm a TIDAL WAVE like the JAPANESE TSUNAMI
    What you got & who's army? None of your weapons threaten
    I'll Mortal Kombat, Shinobi, UFC your ass like Street Fighter or Tekken!
    I reckon i'm up for the win while your shoddy ass is second
    If you come to the UK i'll leave your body parts in The Brecons (Brecon Beacons)
    What becons is a bright future while yours looks small
    I'll beat you at your own game like Barcelona beat Arsenal in football
    Sorry, i meant SOCCER!! Almost forgot, stupid Yanks invent words!!
    I say cool, you say rad, i say trainers, you say sneakers.. YOU INVENT WORDS!
    When my left lands it for deff strands Deth, so he can't find home
    I'LL ALWAYS BE AHEAD, AND NOT JUST BECAUSE OF TIME ZONES!!
    My rhymes are known to cause more than a debacle when i startle
    Deathstrike is from a COMIC, yet nothing he writes is left to MARVEL!!
    Everything i spitt-at-you is ''marble'' coz i leave you stuck like a STATUE
    Facts true, he's a fighting instructor! But in war of words, i outmatch you!!
    The trouble is he thinks he scarred me well, but i can hardly tell
    After he gets beat here...he'll go back to crying in the R.B.L
    He can't harm me, oh well! When i merk-these-spears-scold
    Funny your the one ''taking it serious'' when we're both THIRTY YEARS OLD
    His fears told! What you say don't leave me REMOTELY RATTLED
    Only reason i'm on R.M is he PM'd:''Join & pleeease... VOTE ON MY BATTLE''
    Even after FIVE YEARS absense from the top letter i've got better
    DETH COULDN'T MAKE CHOPPED HEATHER BURN IN HOT WEATHER
    Get dropped, severed! Like i said before, you can't spitt ish to thee
    Its no mystery why your life is ''SHORT'' like ''U.S HISTORY''
    Bringing fists to thee! When ''boxing'' i'm THROWING ATTACKS LIKE ALI
    Like Biggie once said: Man, i'll send you ''GOING BACK TO CALI'' (he's from Cali)
    Dump you in a back alley! Throwing Deth on the scrap heap
    Even if I GAGGED HIM, Deth still still couldn't TRAP HEAT
    Tearing up ya rap sheet! This fake gets whacked, beat....
    Put ya ''COFFIN IN A HEARSE'' coz all know ''DEATH TAKES THE BACK SEAT''
    I spitt curses! G Force inflicts vursus both your shit verses
    DEATH'S KILLED in ''head on collisions'' coz I FLIP HEARSES
    You can't test this ace champ, i'll leave your face stamped
    I'm an ''avalanche on Everest'', your stood at BASE CAMP!!!
    This wack-laim lacks flame, your that tame, i stack the pain
    Bringing ''TORTURE'' as I ''stretch your mind'' when i ''RACK'' YOUR BRAIN
    Back my name ten times with enzymes to bend minds
    I'll baffle Dethstryque when i strike Death, so he can't end ryhmes
    He be asking 'when's time'? Coz ''death'' IS ''clock watching''
    Put you asunder, yup! His ''numbers up'' quicker than HOPSCOTCHING
    Spitting hot toxin to make you ''crack'' up like i put ROCKS IN
    When KICK BOXING i ''hit ya mouth'', so you could say 'I STICK SOCKS IN'!!
    'Suffer fate as you suffocate'! I'm the lyrical ryhme fox!
    I bind lots of tape around ya body until ya spine flops
    Causing ''panic'' like STUCK IN TIGHT SPOTS when you CAN'T FIND LOCKS
    REMEMBER DETH!.. ''TIME STOPS'' WHEN YOUR STUCK IN A ''PINE BOX''!!!!
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  8. DethStryque

    DethStryque DethStryque theInvincible

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    Oookay.I see how ya doin thangs.Lemme get this morning class over and brb. You're in trouble,son.

    5/16/2011 10:30pm PST


    Just got back from work and class and checked in tuh letcha know I'm not trippin.Took a few moments first to respond to stupid azz T.a.C. in the R.W.Z. thread. My seminars yesterday and new class students and training today and work took up all my time.But I'm clearing my schedule tomorrow early evening so I'll be whoopin yo azz before 6pm Cali time. Good drop my manz G-FORCE and good luck.

    5/17/2011

    Back home in 1-2 hours,traffic permitting. I'll drop by 630pm.
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    DethStryque DethStryque theInvincible

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    YOU KAIN'T KEEP UP WITH THE RHYME SCHEME!!!

    G-Force nobody like you! I'll cap you in front of the neighborhood! Watch! They'll just laugh!
    I said:"G-Force,nobody like you! I'll cap you in front of the Neighborhood Watch! They'll just laugh!"
    Hell must hath...no fury like Deth thee Invincible flexin these syllables wreckin G's physical
    Dialect in effect genuflect or these missiles'll check ya frees with weaponry like pistols pulled
    My sickles'll splitcha bull! G's unlyrical n pitiful...in text in flesh audio or even digital!
    My scripts are full of mystical hieroglyphical script like wicca scrolls but sicca tho
    Trick my slicka prose whip ya dome n liftcha toes like I hitcha with the trey...
    Billups off the pick n roll!! http://youtu.be/_X2_pSVSjKU
    Ya chicken flow uh gitcha skull rocked n fried! I'll cold cock this guy n leave ya
    grill swoll up like I Botox'd ya eye!
    Don't box with my...major flow! I'll scalp ya head with razored quotes
    Fillet ya notes blade ya folks n blaze ya dolts with laser bolts!!
    My chapters will shatter shields with chatter daggers that crackle grills!
    My battler spiel n savage skill collects bodies like battle fields!!
    That's for real! When you're in position tuh git finished you're
    Deep throatin my pistol. Ya lips'll show my FORTY LOVE like TENNIS SCORES
    My flow's intended for when it's war! I'll rip ya core with bitter swords
    You suck so much ya tongue got blister sores...on it's blister sores!!
    One punch uh knock you off ya feet like Cinderella's slippers you're
    Gettin whipped like masochists ya ass git ripped n split in four
    One jab you'll hit the floor! I'm liftin booths like twister storms with blazin flows
    Speakin nukes tuh lean ya troops for bein souped...OREGANO

    Deth uh crush n mash ya pale butt ass! War with me n I'll demolish this whelp!
    You lost so bad you can't find yaself with a mirror...AND a psychologist's help!!
    Knock G-Force tuh orbit like Venus is for lickin assorted penises
    My morbid fiendish spits...uh leave ya brain stem missin like aborted fetuses
    Bust with furious pleasure like Demon jizz when squeezin this lark with its beam n clips
    Choke this G-Force mark til his breathin quits,his heart cease its ticks with siezin fits!
    When I put my meat in his trick? She'll scream n twitch like babies having teething fits!
    Toe tuh toe I'll throw speeding fists givin you lesions mixed with bleeding lips
    I'll spit fire like Satan's breeding pits then wizz on you so you're leaving pissed!
    My teeming wits lifts this preening Brit up up and away like I bucked the K!!
    Dawg,I'll...



    ...HOLD UP! HOLD UP! WHAT THE FUCK HE SAY?

    You said I rhyme asinine but on Yahoo you claimed I'm "the mastermind"
    In every battle you dapped my lines and modeled your whole style after mine!
    For five years you tried queer tuh match my shine but I dismantle minds like ratchets primed
    G-Force,run up n gitcha hat flipped I'm...the one who'll lean ya ass like a slanted spine!
    It's about tuh git raunchy y'all as I calmly maul n twist G-Force's ribs like kanji,yall!!
    Deth's flows wreck bones til G's insides are exposed//Expo's like Montreal!!
    I flow like the ocean! Ya weak nouns kain't even flow like a creek now!!
    Punch ya spine n like pirated CDs I'll make ya discs leak out!
    If I'm spittin drops or sendin hots you'll always end up tossed
    Ya girl peeped my meat n like a NBC sitcom...she had tuh make FRIENDS with RAS//ROSS!! [4]
    Punches make ya appendix pop from oodles of nouns til ya noodle gets trounced
    The Uze uh kapow n put this G-male//mail in a box like Google accounts!!
    Deth v G-Force? I'll Cujo this poodle n start nukin ya sounds
    Cuz bitch you couldn't spit sick if I puked in ya mouth!!

    What juice you on? In ZULU the White man lost,we didn't lose to him!
    Shaka Zulu bruised ya chin n skewed ya men soon as the fued begins!
    So fuck you and fuck England,bitch! I'll wreck ya set with fours
    Then place my dick within Kate Middleton and make Prince William press record!
    Plus I'll buck n blam malice in Buckingham Palace n lift ya Queen with tech nine clips!
    While pissin in the English Channel shoutin:"Senshonalanga"...that's ZULU for "WEST SIIIIIDE",bitch!!


    [1] CHAUNCEY BILLUPS YouTube - ‪Chauncey Billups Hits 8 Threes and Scores 36‬‏

    [2] KANJI

    [3] ZULU--contrary to G-Force's claim,the Zulu win the battle AND the war,eventually... http://youtu.be/-tS9B7_2Gz0

    [4] Ras is my real name,sounds like ROSS from FRIENDS...
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  10. G Force

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    Cool, overall good battle Deth! It took for ever but we got it finished in the end! Lets get some votes up!
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    smittyrhythm you love 2 hate me

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    This is gonna take me a while to do. But so far I give Deth round 1 and G Force round 2. Good battle, long read. A lot to interpret.
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  12. DethStryque

    DethStryque DethStryque theInvincible

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    man the stuff I REALLY wanted to put down extends beyond the bar count limit.There are like 140 more bars of real firepower that I wanted to put in there...
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  13. smittyrhythm

    smittyrhythm you love 2 hate me

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    Round 1----------------------------

    -----G Force's intro to his first round wasnt his strongest. Followed up with a lot of one two punch bars but then gradually fell into general rhyme schemes..

    Holla! I'm the boss, your in the slow lane making no gain
    These flows rain, smashing up your nose 'n' brain like taking cocaine
    I bring snow to maim, froze his frame with these pros that reign
    Its true believe me, ''smash your head thru a TV'', bringing you CLOSE TO FAME
    Just like CLOTHES TO DAMES this battle will COST YOU AN ARM & A LEG!!!!!
    Dropping psalms on the reg that bring harm so you beg
    Coz i HIT YOU WITH SO MANY SHELLS its like i'm ''farming eggs''

    ---I liked this, rhyme scheme and the material was good. But then there was evidence of alot of filler that wasnt very direct...

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    Yeah, your just a cartoon! Punches ''hit so hard'' they leave you on a FAR MOON
    These bars are harpoons that ''rip your tongue'' like BARBED SPOONS
    I'm masked doom like MF! You get ''swept away'' like FAST BROOMS
    Death could never ''be fresh'', EVEN IF HE SLEPT IN BATHROOMS

    ---here the punches werent very direct nor was the wordplay as impressive as other verses that Ive seen from G before. Seemed rushed.


    This tongue clouts in fun bouts coz i bring tones 'a' raps to plunder chaps
    My brains raw! I'll ''chop you with a chainsaw'' like LUMBERJACKS
    This lame bores aims floored, he should have stayed under wraps
    These ''lightning shots'' get such a ''round of applause'', even THUNDER CLAPS!!!
    Bringing more heat with the war speech, causing the sun to crack
    Death is getting ''SON'd''! He should have brought his MUM to rap!

    --- this was tight.****finitely shouldve taken more advantage of thundercat references and wordplays, I feel like this couldve been stretched out further..


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    This weak dork Geek force is so souped he leaked borscht!
    Toldja be-fore...speak war n gitcha meat scorched!
    I'll roll on you like a 3-door elite Porsche.Re-tort with the street torch
    Float G north on the sea shore after I chop n stick him like sweet pork!
    All your multis are gee...FORCED!! My songs duh monsta grabbin mics n transformin like Beast Wars! YouTube - Transformers Beast Wars Intro and Outro 1997
    Punches gitcha bean warped,teeth torqued n soared to
    far away lands like the Peace Corps!!
    Bitch I'll swing swords with obscene force til ya bleed quarts from three-fourths
    of ya dweeb corpse!!
    Cream dwarfs like G-force! My speech scorch like blammin cannons
    You'll git ate like a veal meal course fed to a man from a land of famine!
    I plan tuh plant him when I jab his abs n slam n hook him like snaggin
    salmon!!
    G-force beefin? I'll CAN OF SPAM him! Revive his spirit...then damn
    his phantom!!
    When I rap I'm spazzin hack n slash him like the Manson fam n their
    manic stabbin!

    ---This was a sick entrance from Dethstryque. Multiples, good rhyme scheme all fell into G-Force. Overall through Deth's first round he displayed a better use of nameplays and wordplays. The only thing I dismiss about deths first verse is that its full of links and youtube references, if somebody doesnt know what the hindenburg disaster is theyre either twelve or under a rock retarded. Still, a good verse.

    Round 1: Deth

    Round 2------------------------------- High-light \/

    I'll leave your frees torched! Get ''killed in the field'' like WHEAT SCORCHED
    Speak war? Your weak scrawls ''lack firewpower'' like a PEACE FORCE
    In street brawls G puts an ''end to Deth'' but without the REMORSE
    My G Force blows you away with ease of course like a HURRICANE TO A CHEAP PORCH
    Your just breeze - talk! I'll beat you in your country & drain every resource
    Coz everything i spitt is TOXIC like BP OIL SPILLS ON YOUR BEACH SHORES
    Meat whore, sweet pork, three fourths, dweeb corpse, might as well write ''SEA HORSE''
    My multies forced? The point is, you just wrote anything that rhymes with G FORCE!!!


    ---------G Force came much harder in his entrance with these first 8 bars. Honestly Deth by the time I was through the sixth bar of your entrance I was over bumpin into links. There's gotta be a different way you can link your references to your verse if you're going to go through the effort of doing that.
    Im not going to lie, it was easier to lose interest in reading Dethstryques verse on this round. He stayed away from G's verse at making rebuttals, however noble, but I still wanted to see some creative counters from both sides and I feel like G Force did a much better job at doing this. I feel like its a necessary part of a battle that's this long with this many rounds. G Forces round felt more complete and less shoved together. He made it work naturally without forcing the pieces together. With that being said:

    Round 2: G Force
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  14. DethStryque

    DethStryque DethStryque theInvincible

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    This right here is a good vote and shows EXCELLENT effort.Are you gonna use the R.W.Z. copy and paste category thing? It would make your voting process ALOT faster,and you can drop your explanation at the end of the category breakdown if you want.

    Not everyone's as well read as you are,smitty,that's why I left links and stuff.Remember how heads didn't know what I was talking about before in previous battles,and me and TaC and Jai and others went round and round about it? They're of the opinion that if you have to explain a punch or link a punch,the punch is wakk.I'm of the opinion that most of the punches TaC favors are repetitive because the knowledge base and style preference used for them are very shallow and soon everyone will sound like each other and run out of fresh material due to inflexible mindset and ignorance.That's why the RBL tends to feature punches that are funny but clearly juvenile for the most part; it gets corny pretty fast. That's also why so many peeps slept on your sophisticated wordplay for so long in the RBL;especially in the beginning.

    Btw,my Round 3 had way more bars than the character limit allowed,and I had my cousin put my Round 3 up initially (using my password and my account) because I wasn't near the PC.He pasted up the whole thing,saw it didn't fit,and just randomly cut off bars until it fit under the character limit.That's why I came in about 15 minutes ago and put what was SUPPOSED to be in my verse,instead of just what would fit.
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  15. DethStryque

    DethStryque DethStryque theInvincible

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    Good job man and good luck!
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  16. G Force

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    Err Deth, why have you just edited your last verse and added more bars to take it up to 70 bars? Its 48 bar verses!
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  17. DethStryque

    DethStryque DethStryque theInvincible

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    We agreed earlier after the first round to go 80 bar max,remember? You told me you had no problem with that.If it bothers you still? I'll chop 22 bars off.No biggie. It's done...and under 48 bars prolly now.Makes no nevermind to me.
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  18. G Force

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    Yeah we agreed that based on the fact you were going to drop at the time before you did a disappearing act for nearly a month, and the battle got closed down. Then you reopened the thread and didn't mention shit about it at the beginning of this new thread, and since your other verses before my last two matched around 48 i drew the assumption that you were just chucking down the originally agreed 48 coz you had been so busy and just wanted to get the verses done and dusted.

    You should have realised this after my last drop! Because it would be blatantly obvious...you could say after my VERSE 3, 'Hey G Force, remember what we said weeks ago about doing one longer verse'? 'Add some more bars before i drop 48 and then add a sneaky 20 the day after'. If you said that before i'd be like 'OK, here you go'! So yeah, chop out about TWENTY!
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  19. DethStryque

    DethStryque DethStryque theInvincible

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    I already dropped the bars.I counted them first.There was only 58,not 70.Now there's about 46.
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  20. DethStryque

    DethStryque DethStryque theInvincible

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    Let's get the voting in folks...
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