[[THE MAG]] The RSTL Tribune: Issue 5, Week 11

Discussion in 'The Rapmusic Storytelling/Topical League' started by Quriosity, Dec 3, 2007.

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  1. Got Life?

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    we get what baron's arguing, but it leaves stretched bars when you really look at the meat of it all...and I know you're in college muffin..
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  2. Lucifa

    Lucifa Viva La Eva

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    that's exactly what Baron's saying .. cos in the 2nd format people will be like "your lines are stretched" .. 1st format .. people be like "flow was hot" ..

    people are already mad inconsistant when they comment in their votes .. this shit just makes it worse ..

    e.g. -
    "that verse was mad hard to read the structure was too complex"
    same guy a week or 2 later to same writer
    "that verse was mad easy to read the structure should be more complex"

    [dunno]
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  3. Bonnie Bathory

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    I know what he is arguging too, about the bars... but the bars can vary... like I said people stretch them over more and less measures depending on their rhyming style and the tempo... twista could take up eight lines in one bar... its still eight lines and one "bar"... because of how its written... if you have to sacrifice cutting your piece down in length to distinguish your flow by cutting your long lines in half then that's just how it is I guess... that's how you write... but you don't get to stretch your line limit longer because the structure of your style has to be written like that... you choose to right that way, without stretching your lines... so, just because you cut them in half to suit your style, doesn't mean you get twice the line limit

    And about writing in the paragraph... if you want to be technical ya, thats all one line... as far as text is concerned... but also, as far as text is concerned, that is terrible structure... and i'd be surprised if anyone read the whole paragraph... if they did, id be surprised they liked the rhyme because it's not easy for most to follow...
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  4. Got Life?

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    ^ she knows what the fuck is up...
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  5. J o o k

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  6. J o o k

    J o o k Guest

    In other news, LUCIFA shocked the world.
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  7. Got Life?

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    blah, if he wins next week is going to be no fun, i want to face someone that's actually a good writer...
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  8. Baron Mynd

    Baron Mynd Swaggersaurus Rex

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    Once again, im sorry.
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  9. Got Life?

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  10. Baron Mynd

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    The shit storm that took place this week.

    There was no need for it all.
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  11. Got Life?

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  12. Lucifa

    Lucifa Viva La Eva

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    [youtube]MWjKwzbE3yc[/youtube]
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  13. Baron Mynd

    Baron Mynd Swaggersaurus Rex

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    It should be a good match.
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  14. LokStok

    LokStok Fuck that LokStrok cunt

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    if a flood of votes don't come in for return .. and I get my name etched into one of those po-po shields .. then no-show next week .. does that mean GL? can't claim to be 3x champ? ..

    to know he sat there all week writing his arse off with yet another self proclaimed dope verse with all the originality his weekly gore stories hold .. in his desperate attempts to try and prove he's this writer that is 20 levels above me .. only for me to no-show .. would be quite humourous ..
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  15. Baron Mynd

    Baron Mynd Swaggersaurus Rex

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    That would be ROFLZTASTIC!
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  16. J o o k

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    Is that good music in the place you live lucy?
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  17. Got Life?

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    what did numb nuts say?
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  18. DiC GeTs GuLLy

    DiC GeTs GuLLy Hello

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    u sir r a cheating lil bitch... recycling ur verse last week to beat weezy

    this was just sent to me obviously to catch GL cheating....

    the verse he posted against Weezy last week was recylced from over a year ago against Vigil in the RSTL... doesn't really matter who sent it to me does it. lmao @ faggo tryna accuse me of recycling since I came back.... wack ass
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  19. Bonnie Bathory

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    ^ lol werd... well... you got almost a whole month to write your verse... I think you should be DQ'd for recycling too... I wrote 64 lines in 4 days... you spent 3 weeks doin your shit and matched it up to a pic... lame sauce!
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  20. Bonnie Bathory

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    ^^^^ ahaha that made me feel like such a little shit!!!!!!!!
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