The Greatest Rapper Alive.

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  1. dsp2k5

    dsp2k5 Dime Sack Pimp

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    The beat is deep in his mind rumbling like thunder
    He has to get on the stage, be tough and cut the mustard
    Come alive and inspire cultures and subcultures
    Hotties all around him, real nut busters ...
    His blood pumping, adrenaline running ...
    His kingdom is comming, he's getting richer every show
    He is gonna get platinum, his competition barely gold ..
    Autograph jotting everywhere he goes ..
    Fine dimes waiting in line tryin to tear his clothes
    Let it go though, he is so used to it ...
    Every soul at his show is glued to him
    He gotta give em what they paid for, not be rude to em
    They record the show on they phone and go YouTube it.
    Amusing as it seems to be the juice of their dreams ..
    The beauty is the beast, and if he truly is the king ..
    Then why does he feel he has to be so lonely?
    Other artists always chill with they old homies ..
    He got to where he is by spotting those phonies ...
    Thinkin "solely the best at this shit, maybe god chose me"
    He's not the only one thats ever been in this predicament
    He remembers Elvis was, but how did he deal with it?
    Wishing he had family or friends to live with him.
    To steal from him .. every now and then go out on a limb for him
    The feeling fades away as he takes the stage ...
    There is something in the beat that just makes him safe.
    The lights are bright, but his new shades break the glaze ..
    Wishing he could break away, thinking they've created a slave ..
    No shackles and chains, his dungeon is a little bit different ...
    Whatever he wants, he can have them deliver it
    But for him to go in public and get it is belligerent ..
    But he wants Big Red, yet they keep bringing Speariment
    Fearing its too late to be another face in society
    Trying, he can see the irony ...
    Violently he tries the weed ...
    Then he shoves it aside like a Lima Bean
    Thinking that's enough he runs to his closet ..
    Getting into street clothes, he plans to stop it
    He runs into the public, hands covering his face to block it
    Runs farther off, not arguing with logics ...
    Runs till he cent hear any music, where people are shopping
    Stopping hidden and nearly out of breathe
    He sees kids sitting around, one without the rest
    Not his problem, but enough for him to stop and guess
    Then the other kids walk off, leaving that one all by his self ..
    He looks scared, but this isn't his first rodeo in this position
    The he witnesses as the kid puts on headphones and listens
    As he repositions, he notices the kid has something missing
    He is blind, but his smile refreshes his disposition ..
    Then to his surprise, the child begins to rap
    A crowd gathers round and begins to clap ...
    He holds his fist out so they can give him dap ...
    He is really funny, he keeps getting laughs.
    The kid is gifted with his raps, a real crowd pleaser
    When its over, everyone leaves, the kid points his round finger
    In his direction, then says "you sound cleaner"
    "Heard those loud sneakers banging on the pavement.
    Relax, your name is safe, I won't say it.
    When cancer took my eyes, I hated it.
    But your music motivated my life and saved it"
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    dsp2k5 Dime Sack Pimp

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    Upping
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  3. music31

    music31 The Best Hip-Hop Producer

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    The is know one currently who is the best

    I don't believe anyone is the best at this present time. All of are good rappers pasted away. We need someone right now. All you rappers come to BEATCLUBSOUTH.COM
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    Way to long , why am i gonna sit here readin this shit whats the point , jus put it to a beat and then lemme hear .. lol
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    dsp2k5 Dime Sack Pimp

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    If I had audio equipment I would homie. I swear I would ... proll drop.a.new freestyle everyday lol. I am looking into it though ... got seven hundred dollars in fines to pay so that means it won't ne happening this month though lol
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  6. T.R.C....

    T.R.C.... New Member

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    damn man badass freestyle right there i mean some lines i couldnt figure out the rhyme but yeah probably sound perfect in audio so no problem keep it up
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  7. Tacky Jones

    Tacky Jones www.TaCsmassivecock.gov

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    fuck that, if the shits dope, aint nothin too long to read. this was a sick drop. was feelin the vibe of it. nice flow, good lyrics. the story was cool. nice drop homie
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    dsp2k5 Dime Sack Pimp

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    thnx a lot lol ... yeah i just got the internet back for a lil bit lol ... aint gotta mess wit that droid ... got a lot of stuff i was workin on ... ill be droppin some stuff periodically ... yall stay real ... thx again
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