The Great Pretender....keystyle

Discussion in 'Poetry Realm' started by lpoet, Oct 13, 2003.

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  1. Xero Satsujin

    Xero Satsujin OnLy gOd kNoWs oR Goes

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    I had read this a while ago, just never got to reply to it, I love this poem, good shit here man...Nothing bad to say, only good, because thats how you come all the time. you come correct and pop off hot shit like this constantly...
    test
  2. Subconcious

    Subconcious CiPrIoLa DyNaStY

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    I like this a lot...i can think back to not even 2 weeks ago that i was in the same position....very well written for a keystyle.

    ShArIn ThE LuV
    test
  3. 49th Prophet

    49th Prophet Dark Magic Inferno

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    This was surprisingly deep for a keystyle...
    I love your work man you should drop more often...
    you came up with some nice lines
    and if this is a keystyle get some written shit up here...

    much love

    peace
    test
  4. 6th_plague

    6th_plague More then meets the eye

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    good depth and strong meaning...

    very nicer drop lp pz
    test
  5. lpoet

    lpoet POET

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  6. da_after_shock

    da_after_shock New Member

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    the way u started it was gangsta

    Trying not to act as if I’m depressed but
    These feelings rest in between
    Yesterday’s heartbreak and tomorrows failure
    And I try to surpress that in each and every today
    Loved ones and family pulling at both my arms
    So I close my eyes and try to dream them away


    man i really have felt like that lately man.....u always drop such fiyah..big up man
    test
  7. mocha_licious

    mocha_licious New Member

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    very moving and the imagery was hella nice...good drop...~one love~
    test
  8. Oni Mag

    Oni Mag ~~~~~~

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    Damn, real real nice for a key.
    "I put the burden upon my shoulders
    And my knees are slowly giving in"

    Was feelin all of it, liked that creativity^ also.
    I could never key this good though our styles are different. Good job. 8.5-9/10 easily.
    test
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