Papoose fucking sucks then. You need some better hip-hop role models, you're aiming too low. on a side-note, what the fuck? I rhymed "girls" twice? hahaha! but yo, did you actually play that track? because it's clearly one of those "replay this shit a bunch because it sounds nice" tracks. I wasn't exactly trying to focus on the deep, in-depth, lyrical content of suburban party life. your lyrics don't gotta be fucking amazing every single time you rap... but they gotta be entertaining -- and your shit is NEVER entertaining. so, zip it.