The Ghostwriter... Need verses?

Discussion in 'Audio Emcee Hook Ups' started by Free Lynx, Jun 6, 2005.

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  1. DZK

    DZK DZKonline.net

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    Papoose fucking sucks then. You need some better hip-hop role models, you're aiming too low.

    on a side-note, what the fuck? I rhymed "girls" twice? hahaha!

    but yo, did you actually play that track? because it's clearly one of those "replay this shit a bunch because it sounds nice" tracks. I wasn't exactly trying to focus on the deep, in-depth, lyrical content of suburban party life.

    your lyrics don't gotta be fucking amazing every single time you rap... but they gotta be entertaining -- and your shit is NEVER entertaining.

    so, zip it.
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  2. Free Lynx

    Free Lynx ®m legend Peter Parker

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    hostility!
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  3. ChaseNCashe

    ChaseNCashe If it aint Polo, Keep It!

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    LMFAO@ The Shells shit.

    "If you and her is reckless//then I'ma squeeze the gun till it drop Shells like Universal records" - Young Ry
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  4. Full-Clipz

    Full-Clipz Dominican nikka

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    womppppppppppppppppppp
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  5. The PusherMan

    The PusherMan New Member

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    damn I forgot about that show..I watched it a lot when I was little...
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  6. Free Lynx

    Free Lynx ®m legend Peter Parker

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    dont respond to that person untill they get a keyboard that works^
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  7. Milli Monotone

    Milli Monotone Mr. Like I Give A

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    am i the only one here that cant believe what the fuck is goin on.....

    DZK clownin someone on content? this niqqa be spittin lines about the types of rock found on the moon, no beef homie but wtf, dont speak on nobodys content especially when u still tryna pass off niqqa in ya raps

    Atom React > DZK
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  8. Atom React

    Atom React aka JAYO

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    then thats your every track, i can almost always pick shit like that out.. so dont come sideways, you got a good flow, but dont knock my writing because u cant write all that great yourself, your carried by flow.


    and dont tell me thats entertaining.. you need to have some decent shit at least to be entertaining, 50 isnt always good lyrically but hes entertaining, but his level of writing that shit is above your "tilt-a-whirl" shit

    never enemies got love an mad memories
    ima try to blow up, just so ya'll remember me
    one huge party of life just like i said it'd be
    an every girl i kiss will say it taste good like hennessey
    but it will never get to me, an its never been in me
    id sell crack before i work like the industry
    never be an imitation it'll never happen
    before i make a song with ja rule, id quit rappin
    no offense dog, but i gotta keep it real with ya'll
    wont make a track with a cat that i aint feel at all
    an dont let that make you go write rhymes
    dont try to up ya skill dog, i aint feelin u in this lifetime


    i write like no one, not jay, not nas, none of that.. so get off it, actin like i do, when im not writing deep ish i dont bite styles, when im writing deep ish i dont bite styles, you cant honestly say i sound like them

    you been rappin longer, your older, and you still think you can talk, its like.. all you niqqas got about 2-3 years on me actin like your so much nicer when that would be the only reason why if u even are at all, gimme them 2-3 years and id shit on you worse then i feel i already can
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  9. illete

    illete Timothy Sinatra

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    you aint that tight
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  10. Atom React

    Atom React aka JAYO

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    your right im not yet, but im nicer then a lot of these people that think they are
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  11. DZK

    DZK DZKonline.net

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    you are one delusional motherfucker
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  12. SHOWBOAT

    SHOWBOAT piff'n purple...

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    lol @ this thread turnin' into everyone dissin on atom....
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  13. Yahway

    Yahway power to my cock

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    okay, two more nigguhs who have no chance to make it in the game EVER are arguing about who is better. pm each other, i'd be piss if i was parker, you nigguhs are fucking his hustle.
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  14. Free Lynx

    Free Lynx ®m legend Peter Parker

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    ^^ nah im cool they keeping the thread on top, more beef!!!!
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  15. Atom React

    Atom React aka JAYO

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    watch out, the next russel simmons
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  16. Yahway

    Yahway power to my cock

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    ^if you wrote your punchlines more like this, you'd be unstobbable mole ass nigguh.
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  17. AvEnuE

    AvEnuE I..I Get it..Yeah..Yehh

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    stop bitch already ... its startin to smell like sweaty gorrilla palms
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  18. A.V.I.

    A.V.I. Well-Known Member

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    haha, atom react writes terribly
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  19. phenom2002

    phenom2002 GET YA MAFUCKIN HANDS UP!

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    damn dzk out for nigggas asses lmao
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  20. Atom React

    Atom React aka JAYO

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    id write your whole family under

    ps: kid who said id be "unstoppable"...

    tell *****s who voted in another site finals when i hit nimrod with that for being the black dude that loves asians



    ps2: buy parker verses, dude is SICK

    let me help the promotion well i drop bullshit posts with all ya'll
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