The Ghostwriter... Need verses?

Discussion in 'Audio Emcee Hook Ups' started by Free Lynx, Jun 6, 2005.

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  1. Atom React

    Atom React aka JAYO

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    because unlike 95% of this site i dont care whats said, meaning im not gonna be like "oh he got me good i better not respond ill be embarassed".. i mean for real, is there "sonning" online? can u be embarassed? cant say i ever have, and im not here tryin to kiss ass, if someones nice ill respect it, but DZK isnt, its bout time someone took him off his online high horse.


    i just seen niqqa says im like EVERYONE else.. but since i live upstate im no good cause i dont live like people in the city, i just want to?. homie where i live has had a HIGHER murder rate then NYC at one time if not still now, and a higher robbery rate.. its like the middle point between NYC and a lot of places, you know how many niqqas stop through here and sell cause as serious as the cops are its not as serious as the city? just cause im upstate dont mean shit, the fuck??? people are grimey EVERYWHERE, u dont have to be in a big city to see that. and its not like these niqqas are uppin the crime rate where they live anyways, being through shit is one thing, killin peoples and robbin houses is another


    i mean fuck, just last week this dude i met not to long ago got his throat slit by his fuckin girlfriend and her moms well they tried beatin him up and they ended up killin him. should i start sayin my towns more grimey then where u at now?
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  2. Full-Clipz

    Full-Clipz Dominican nikka

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    The whole point is that u cant rap.
    there is no other point
    stop babbling
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  3. Full-Clipz

    Full-Clipz Dominican nikka

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    Im sayin my *****...

    these cats never learn
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  4. zorque yo

    zorque yo daog peanix

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    i maisss aghaorstt arwwiterea athat shaow was awasosme
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  5. Dahnamics

    Dahnamics Bitch, Don't Kill My Vibe

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    LMAO @ DZK, do Oujia's really say"Good Bye" at the bottom? lol...

    holla at parks, kid is sick with it..
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  6. Free Lynx

    Free Lynx ®m legend Peter Parker

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    Buy one verse get a free hook buy one verse get a free hook

    Aim:Mistah Parker

    E-mail- iownfullsail@yahoo.com get at me!
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  7. LeEo

    LeEo aka L Dubz

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    lynx dun care bout da babblin give him his money...LOL...
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  8. DZK

    DZK DZKonline.net

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    I listened to your deep songs... They aren't deep at all. They're a jumbled mess of incredibly confusing lyrics that don't ever come across as focused, intelligent or authentic. Those, combined with your wackballs vocal-attempts to emulate Joe Buddens, Jay-Z and Nas makes me want to vomit. If you can't mimic somebody elses style, do the logical thing and get your own ORIGINAL STYLE. Get your own ORIGINAL LYRICS.

    Dude, you have NOTHING to say because you don't know shit about shit. You just copy whatever the fuck your favorite rapper says while trying to relate it somehow to your life. So it ends up coming out sounding like Nas if Nas happened to be a big giant pussy with zero talent...

    You ever wonder why nobody feels your lyrics? Because your thoughts are all scatterbrain and random. Look at the posts you write. Look at your fucking name, for fucks-sake, it's as meaningless as all your rhymes are. You expect people to sit down and follow that horrid shit from beginning to end? Are you on motherfucking crack?

    Learn how to fucking write a decent line before you go criticizing anybody else, nobody gives two fucks about who you think is dope and if you're being honest about how you feel about people.

    And that faggy little smug shit-eating grin you're posing with in your picture makes me want to slap the motherfucking shit out of you for even having the audacity to comment on anybody at all. Keep your fucking mouth shut. You suck dick.
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  9. ChaseNCashe

    ChaseNCashe If it aint Polo, Keep It!

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    Okay DZK just deaded this nigga again.

    WoW.

    LMFAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAO!

    What does his name stand for. You could've atleast spelled it Adam React.
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  10. illete

    illete Timothy Sinatra

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    rofl..
    ps i ghostwrite for DZ's grandma
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  11. Atom React

    Atom React aka JAYO

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    then accept and see me, we can drop money on it


    im not tryin argue online im tryin see somethin happen
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  12. ChaseNCashe

    ChaseNCashe If it aint Polo, Keep It!

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    ^^^ Son you would honestly lose IMO.

    DZK not wack...he just dont appeal to everyone.

    He don't appeal to me..but he's not wack by a longshot.
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  13. Free Lynx

    Free Lynx ®m legend Peter Parker

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    i appreciate the feedback ive been getting ya'll know a deal when you see it, remember if you cannot contact me on aim reach me at iownfullsail@yahoo.com
    • +Rep +Rep x 1
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  14. DZK

    DZK DZKonline.net

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    man I don't even like walking to the end of my driveway... why the fuck would I come to NY to battle some random lunchbox? obviously you ain't trying to see shit happen because you know I ain't coming to NY.

    stop talking like you actually can rap, or for that matter, like you actually know what the fuck is going on around you at any given time. dog, I'm surprised you don't wear a motherfucking bike helmet for protection when you walk around, you're a motherfucking tool. your brain must be all mashed up and shit.
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  15. Atom React

    Atom React aka JAYO

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    dont be mad niqqas cant feel you offline anymore, on your "sickle an hammer" shit
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  16. DZK

    DZK DZKonline.net

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    what the mother-fuck are you talking about?

    do you go around playing my music for people "offline?" you ever seen me spit "offline?" you keeping tabs of how many people are playing my shit "offline?"

    dude, you don't know what the fuck is going on.
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  17. SHITTY Bang Bang

    SHITTY Bang Bang freestyle fanatic

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    lmao



    "ARE YOU ON MOTHERFUCKING CRACK ?"
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  18. TAB

    TAB Model

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    "I ain't nothin' fancy like slippers" - Shells

    "I make *****s scream like it was winter" - Shells

    "Shells got the hood on lock like my block was chained up" - Shells

    "I'm the illest since Tupac and Biggie" - Shells

    "Ya'll ain't want nothin' like Terry Schiavo" - Shells LOL.

    "I'm Shells, that's right homie ya'll ain't want nothin' with shells"

    "I'm that ***** flossin' in a coupe, shells be often blazin loops" - Shell

    "Yeh yeh yeh nam sayin I'm shells, that *****s name ring like a bell" - ROFL

    Sorry, had to post this somewhere.
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  19. DZK

    DZK DZKonline.net

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    "I turn tables like DJ Quik"
    -Atom React

    "the last ***** that tried to take my place
    i ate his food, an i aint even say my grace"
    -Atom React

    watch out, this guys going to flip over a table and eat your food and not even praise Jesus before he eats it. ruthless.

    upstate NY crime syndicate masterminds, holla.
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  20. Atom React

    Atom React aka JAYO

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    thanks for saying i wrote papoose's line.. but i didnt sorry



    the parties at my moms house, filled with girls
    barcardi in my palm now - I'm built to hurl
    I treat mics like pussy on the illest of girls
    I freak it like some Carnies by the "Tilt-A-Whirl"

    this must be why this niqqa is fire... right?
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