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  1. lyricalpriest

    lyricalpriest Rap Games Dawson Creek

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    i look out the window pain, and its rainin again//
    roll up this indo mayn , and im blazing again//
    get on the instrumental mayn, and im flaming the pen//
    better tell ya dogs to just.....stay in the den,
    aint none as amazing as him, me... lyrical priest//
    i am a lyrical beast, i just tear thru the streets//
    its like im the origin of rap the way i breath air thru these beats//
    i put life in the rhyme devine design in all of my lines//
    none as hard as mine and i find, the only thing im up against, time//
    so i keep time in my mind , dollar signs in my eyes, love in my heart
    but they say love is a sign of weakness so i show hate to u marks//
    ate thru u narks, i didnt wait for u to start i just went straight to the part//
    'me feasting, its the season to eat, and im fiendin, my belly screamin at me like its
    never eating//
    in a world full of borders and frontlines, prisons and school, the middle of the
    day to me is lunch time but what is it too you?//
    considered a fool bc i dropped outta highscool, its then i began to gain
    knowledge, after i searched for the truth//
    i wouldnt settle for what they tried to show me in a book, so i began to
    discern thru the proof//
    i been on the block,same block the crips hadda shoot out with the
    cops, same spot the head of dea and the rangers
    tried to bang on the bangers//
    i dont claim, but dont claim ima stanger, just bc i dont crack crack with
    razors and clap at haters, i aint warren with
    u saps like oakland raiders//
    i once became a product of the night, lost in the darkness persuing the light//
    then i woke up and decided too fight, said fuck a dub, fuck a gun, realized what the streets took from me
    like my education, my freedom, my life,my stacks, said fuck it im strugglin now and i cant turn back.....



    "Come on let's face it, a ghetto education's basic
    A most a the youths
    them waste it
    And when them waste it, that's when
    them take da guns and replace it
    Then them don't stand a chance at all"-D.Marly
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  2. T.R.C....

    T.R.C.... New Member

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    i like that man the vocab could have used some tweakin but good flow and multis keep it up
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  3. lyricalpriest

    lyricalpriest Rap Games Dawson Creek

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    fa'sho TRC thanks bruh bruh, i just wrote that in like 15 minutes.. so ya it could use work but i was just ventin.. im not a perfectionist
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  4. dsp2k5

    dsp2k5 Dime Sack Pimp

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    yeah not bad at all for 15 minutes ... way better than the last one .. then again i couldnt make it out that great, but this one right here ... this drop right here,, nigga? lol yeah nicely done
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  5. nO gOoD!

    nO gOoD! Life Music :: Press Play

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    this wasn't bad.. it could be better though..


    I'm a perfectionist though.
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  6. lyricalpriest

    lyricalpriest Rap Games Dawson Creek

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    thanks yawl much respect!
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  7. N A S T Y

    N A S T Y Well-Known Member

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    shit gets hard in seattle apparently
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  8. lyricalpriest

    lyricalpriest Rap Games Dawson Creek

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    go to you tube and type in "young nigga from the hill top"
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  9. troubledwaters

    troubledwaters New Member

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    It was pretty good but I had trouble finding the flow at parts.
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