The Curious Case Of Proposition P Part 2 (Death)

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  1. Arsenic P

    Arsenic P A.K.A. PROPOSITION P

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    "pine box and my best dress get up what i'm sportin
    the dirt got the walls closin in on my coffin
    rose pedals and black suits money for an offerin
    nobody gave my eulogy but fuck it i'm my own man
    nobody fucked wit me from the early days
    slick talkin young nigga reached the pearlin gates
    the deacon speakin like i'm decent at my evening wake
    but it was all good ah week ah go i heard'um say
    amazing grace my mother cry's in the church by the pastor
    my daughter can't take it tears runnin even faster
    the hater's still hatin in my grave full of laughter
    the whispers round the church bout how they did that bastard
    this is my last chapter the choir sings faster
    the hurst hit's the gas and i'm gone in ah flash
    wit my luck the niggas prolly hit ah tree and crash
    if you ain't there when this happens you can kiss my ass"
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  2. dsp2k5

    dsp2k5 Dime Sack Pimp

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    I liked this drop homie , nicely done .. very good with the details, even at the beginnings ..

    One of these days I will have the internet in my crib again and will be able to paste my favorite lines .. this.girls phone is all I got right now ... lol this phone tries to put a word down before I type it and it's not always the word I want .. when I typed homie earlier it put.down homosexual lol so my bad.if cuss u out .. I swear its this droid that is doin it lol
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  3. Arsenic P

    Arsenic P A.K.A. PROPOSITION P

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    ^get at me nigga we need to get this shit back to how it was some fresh idea's and collabs is what this site needs before it's dies.1
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  4. Ace the Prophet

    Ace the Prophet A Prophet to the Game

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    What up ars? Man, i meant to get at this earlier but i've been pretty busy. I like this shit man. Flow's really good. Rhyme scheme was nice. Those stood out to me. Some good story telling elements in there too man. Keep this shit up bro!
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    dsp2k5 Dime Sack Pimp

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    I feel ya .. I might be able to write a verse wit this phone but I don't know ... could.portly write one but u might have to edit it to fit right ... I'm feeling that new eminem n Wayne - no love. It's a decent track ....
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