The Chronicles Of Sylus Part 1.

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  1. Kuja

    Kuja Jack Skellington

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    God Is Dead .

    Ten years have passed since the blast, the final conflict of man
    Religion forced our hand, God laughed, as the conscripts began
    Decent men forced to fight, leaving children & sobbing wives..
    Risking there lives, witnessing loved ones with tears in there eyes
    God brought the ingredients which anger cooked up within hells kitchen
    & war was brought forward to all of mankind, served by religion
    Violence savaged as flames of hate ravaged, threatening extinction
    Gunfire was ablaze as blood was shed painting the earth crimson
    Deaths ever presence lingered, people gasping there last breath
    Then the end arrived & mankind survived with barely anybody left
    Hate turned to God instead, faith was renounced amidst the crazyness
    As all those who survived declared the human race now athiests
    Post war earth had only proven, thats Gods love was just illusion
    & eradicating our prayers & faith became the execution
    God had died that day, now a permanent blood stain upon our hands
    No one understands, without faith we shall never grace heavenly lands
    Most places of worship crumbled in the aftermath of the fallout
    Others had worn out, survivors went all out, to tear them all down
    Earth was madness, In secret I kept a Bible that was handed to me
    In my eyes we require purpose, to belive in God is mandatory
    Like giving the keys to the inmates of an asylum, there will be violence
    Except now without God the human race will just suffer in silence
    My name is Sylus, God remains dead but faith is the key to survival
    To seek an holy revival & cleanse our sins as his sole diciple..
    My decison is final, I must make haste & keep faith deep down inside
    I stand before a long road & see a single raindrop in the sky..
    Does that mean that could he be? could God still be alive .....


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  2. Chase Murda

    Chase Murda hostile enviroment

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    ohhhh shit this is fire right here good shit my nigga
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  3. GaLaTeA

    GaLaTeA Well-Known Member

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    "painting the earth crimson" >>>

    You always create incredibly vivid imagery, and this drop was...dope.
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  4. Kuja

    Kuja Jack Skellington

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    Ty for the feedback & also shoutout to Kristina, i know i sent ya the link hehe
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  5. Coup d'état

    Coup d'état Don't believe the hype

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    this is absolutely correct^

    great concept and very good delviery kuja...this was very pessimistic but I like the tone and the way you wrote it...great flow!
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