The book opens...

Discussion in 'Poetry Realm' started by kyza soza, Dec 7, 2004.

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  1. kyza soza

    kyza soza This way up.

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    Thanks for your thoughts and opinions, you're one of the poets i respect most around here and one that i see a piece from you and automatically get an urge to write, im sure you know the feeling when you look at some other peoples pieces. Thanks for the chat last night as well, good guidance lol. I might just stay active, whenever i get inspiration.

    Thanks a bunch, pm me when you online again.

    Stars... That line was suppose to be me thinking about ending this early before i get more hurt. Y'understand? Piece, and blessings for you. Thanks for your kind words tho. Much apprecialted.. ill get at your piece later.
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  2. kyza soza

    kyza soza This way up.

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    Drop links, one last time.
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  3. Hidden_Poetry

    Hidden_Poetry New Member

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    I already told ya what I thought. But I decided to came back and re read it.

    ....as someone already said too, sorry you had to get to this spot that made you write this. :/ It gets better ;o)
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  4. kyza soza

    kyza soza This way up.

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    Thank yoooooooooooooooooooou, the girl with the beautiful name :wink:
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  5. nathedawg

    nathedawg New Member

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    yo what up Usual Suspect number one....

    I havent heard from you in a minute... I can see this piece has been on the front page for a hot minute now!! I can see why after reading it... nice drop... simple and to the point.. but a good way of showing your feelings with the book.. mad respect homie... peace tooshort
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  6. kyza soza

    kyza soza This way up.

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    Oh, shiiiiiiiiiiit. Its a throwback member [teet]

    Good to see you around bro, and thanks.
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  7. ChyllTyrant

    ChyllTyrant AmIEternalOrAnEternalist?

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    overall not bad... just not great either... a lot of typos...

    PEACE
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  8. kyza soza

    kyza soza This way up.

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    It was in representation of giving your heart to someone, opening up to them and suchlike.

    I tried to clear it up a bit forya man.

    Aint seen you in a minute man DOG click like WHUT lol.

    I'll get at your poems if i get a chance.. holla on msn or aim if you get a minute sometime.
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  9. ChyllTyrant

    ChyllTyrant AmIEternalOrAnEternalist?

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    thanks for the clarification...

    materialism mixed with love isn't always the best mixture, imo...

    PEACE

    ps. i'll try to hit u up on aim some time, what's ur sn?
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  10. kyza soza

    kyza soza This way up.

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    kyzarealize
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