The Best Piece I've Ever Written

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  1. kyza soza

    kyza soza This way up.

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    I couldnt find it at first =|

    Nah.. uhhh, iuneven know what quite to say really.

    Imagery was cool, its was pretty short. Showed emotion lol.

    *shrugs*
    test
  2. Wicked5744

    Wicked5744 Last I awoke, it was morn

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    Is this the best piece because this is the best way you've ever summed up your own personal life, or is this the best piece because you're messin with us. lol. Intriguing, keep the ink flowin...peace.
    test
  3. absolute zero

    absolute zero Among the living

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    yep.
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  4. Burning Soul

    Burning Soul New Member

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    hmmm... im with quotive..if it is your best piece you have ver written,why would you throw it away? i didnt like it.
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  5. absolute zero

    absolute zero Among the living

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    attention realm dwellers

    THIS PIECE DOES NOT EXIST. I NEVER THROW ANYTHING OF MINE AWAY, I WAS SIMPLY REFERRING TO HOW INFURIATED I CAN GET WHEN DEALING WITH LOVE. .....

    why can't anyone understand this?
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  6. quotive

    quotive 3

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  7. screamer

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    words fill the void with trash
    we want to live the buddahist life
    empty serene thats right
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  8. RealMS

    RealMS Ne te quaesiveris extra

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    hhhhhheeeeeeeeeeeyyyyyy, this is good-I like. People must read to learn lol (HINT!) Anyway reading those lines over and over again, and I saw what you said later-the word "lifeless" sort of said it all, but its all ambiguous to the reader of course. "Lifeless" at first when reading this meant it's been torn so therefore it is nothing now, who cares? Then after seeing what this was really about, I read it again and to me the word means it never did exist in the first place to begin with lol. I applaud you on this one. Here's a pat on the back *pats really hard* lol
    -Much Love
    test
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