The Best Piece I've Ever Written

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  1. absolute zero

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    Lies lifeless at the bottom
    Of my waste basket.
    Ripped into pieces, pieces​















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  2. quotive

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    Well, definitely not your best piece.. lol

    I usually love these, but whats the purpose of this?
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  3. Sykda

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    Kinda short... But makes you wonder... Piece of Paper.. ? Lol.. Interesting.. not good, not bad.. Just interesting.. I realised it was opposite of the Haiku.. which is 5-7-5.. This is 7syllables for the first line, 5 syllables in hte second and 7 in the third.. Opposite of the Haiku.. Which I liked. I don't know if it was intentional but I liked it..
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  4. Borah

    Borah UNFKNBLVBLE

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    What i got out of it was that you did write another piece which was (supposed to be) the best piece ever written. But it ended up on the bottom of the waste basket. Either because it just wasn't the best piece or because you yourself wasn't proud of it.

    About the couple of lines that did make it on to this screen: I like the way it intrigued me to think about the meaning.

    And thanks to Sykda for comment of the Haiku opposite. I didn't notice that right away.
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  5. MCSpo

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    am i meant to be seeing something here, or am i missin the point.....confused
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  6. absolute zero

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    love and rage are directly related.......
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  7. quotive

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    lol I get it..

    and damn, I really don't like this..

    Why would you throw your best PIECE AWAY?!?!? lol
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  8. ߣesseÐ

    ߣesseРI used to pray.

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    deep... lol..

    :smile:
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  9. -RC-

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    must...become...more...abstract.....
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  10. absolute zero

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    ^^lol....come on now....you didn't think i'd really throw anything of mine away do you? quo~ you should know that i don't really like anything i write, therefore i'll never be able to label any piece the best i've ever written. BUT i was laying in bed last night, thinking.....that if i did write the most honest, heartfelt, and "perfect" piece, that i would be so enraged that i would just rip it to pieces, because almost all of my latest work is on heartache....so i pictured myself writing the piece that meant the most to me...and then pictured myself being so distraught that i couldn't help but just rip it into pieces, out of frustration.....


    anyways though.......the piece doesn't exist, lol....

    God bless
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  11. Sole Sovereign

    Sole Sovereign Hungry But Never Starving

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    An look into Ab's window. Different.
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  12. akqrate

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    I Thought It Was About Dat Letter Dat U Were Gona Give That Girl U Like.... But Yeah Fair Enough.... I Enjoyed Peepin ...
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  13. absolute zero

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    ^^ooh, never thought of it that way...

    repped
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  14. akqrate

    akqrate Ear-candy

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    whoa wat does rep do??
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  15. absolute zero

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    it gives you super powers.....if you get enough rep you can do special things....i can breathe underwater now!
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  16. Madnick

    Madnick Modern Laureate

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    pretty much absolute thats how i feel about alot of thing sometimes.
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  17. akqrate

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    i sure cant breathe underwater... the paramedics luckily saved me this time and let me off with a warning...
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  18. absolute zero

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    my rep is higher, therefore my superpowers are much stronger than yours.you'll learn young grasshopper
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  19. Iceberg X

    Iceberg X Registered Drug-User

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    haha, pretty nice idea here. Short, but hey i liked it. It was enjoyable for a couple seconds lol.
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  20. absolute zero

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    thanks man. Not about the length, it's about the quality.....and i have little!
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