Discussion in 'Open Mic' started by Poc*, Jun 8, 2012.
Ok sorry I will leave some feedback, standby 1.
Ok, content was not my cup of tea. You seem to be very angry @ someone. Regardless, the cadence that I imagined to fit the verse made a nice flow. Its hard to give feedback on content solely because of the subject matter. You venting/chest pounding at someone is not something I can really say you did well in "x" but need to improve in "y". Only you can make that determination.
Which is the way it should be, no?
Also the title "The Beginning"... what an interesting choice.
The beginning sounds like a broken circle.
^ Get off my dick gayrod.
Get off my gayrod, dick
lmfao @ you editing it out.
My favorite part was when you said "........."
Separate names with a comma.