The Beginning

Discussion in 'Open Mic' started by Poc*, Jun 8, 2012.

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  1. Poc*

    Poc* New Member

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  2. Darric

    Darric Esta LoCo...

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    Ok sorry I will leave some feedback, standby 1.
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  3. Darric

    Darric Esta LoCo...

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    Ok, content was not my cup of tea. You seem to be very angry @ someone. Regardless, the cadence that I imagined to fit the verse made a nice flow. Its hard to give feedback on content solely because of the subject matter. You venting/chest pounding at someone is not something I can really say you did well in "x" but need to improve in "y". Only you can make that determination.

    Which is the way it should be, no?

    Also the title "The Beginning"... what an interesting choice.
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  4. GaLaTeA

    GaLaTeA Well-Known Member

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    The beginning sounds like a broken circle.
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  6. Poc*

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    ^ Get off my dick gayrod.
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  7. Tacky Jones

    Tacky Jones www.TaCsmassivecock.gov

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    Get off my gayrod, dick
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  8. Tacky Jones

    Tacky Jones www.TaCsmassivecock.gov

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    lmfao @ you editing it out.
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  9. JASON ANTHONY

    JASON ANTHONY White Devil

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    Dope shit.

    My favorite part was when you said "........."
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