The Backstabber

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  1. dsp2k5

    dsp2k5 Dime Sack Pimp

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    How did I miss it with my eyes?
    Now I'm terrified as I revealed the disguise
    Almost as if it were otherwise and I wasn't hit wit this demise
    The lies so slick to intice my trust, damn my luck
    Life sucks when I gotta watch my back and my front
    That's why the content of this brown paper nag ain't my lunch
    Bunch of punks wanna run around now days like backstabbers
    Then they ass is grass when some cat pulls his gat faster
    And that's his last chapter, same sermon, different pastor
    Family shedding tears, where's the laughter?
    I'm not talkin bout the average hustler hitting licks on his grind
    I'm talkin bout them bitches wit drama always on his mind ..
    Every look you get is shiste
    Yall know who he is, yall know his type
    And this time, I will be watching my back ..
    If you wit me, you better be ready to go at da drop of a hat
    I'm busting shots off behind my back non stop wit a gat
    Who the backstabber now? you can start calling me that
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  2. dsp2k5

    dsp2k5 Dime Sack Pimp

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    I for replies to over threw other threads but I can cut and paste the links with this stupid phone.
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  3. cram oremor

    cram oremor New Member

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    tight rhyme homie. True story too, lots of these back stabbers in this world.
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  4. T.R.C....

    T.R.C.... New Member

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    yeah that is dope dude killer flow good multis and a poetic justice type end ha ha good shit
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  5. nO gOoD!

    nO gOoD! Life Music :: Press Play

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    not too bad, this had a pretty good flow to it. I'd say work on your rhyme schemes a little more as a point to improve on, but overall this was some good content.
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  6. mr.redeyez

    mr.redeyez Member

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    DIS WAS SOME REAL SHIT D


    ''How did I miss it with my eyes?
    Now I'm terrified as I revealed the disguise
    Almost as if it were otherwise and I wasn't hit wit this demise
    The lies so slick to intice my trust, damn my luck
    Life sucks when I gotta watch my back and my front
    That's why the content of this brown paper nag ain't my lunch
    Bunch of punks wanna run around now days like backstabbers
    Then they ass is grass when some cat pulls his gat faster
    And that's his last chapter, same sermon, different pastor
    Family shedding tears, where's the laughter?''


    dem bar'z waz heart felt to me...like i said real shit right hea keep it up stay real n stay up fam
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  7. Chase Murda

    Chase Murda hostile enviroment

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    Dam son u gettin better everytime you post my bad about the verse we suppose to do ill hit u up soon i just havent been really up to rappin lately until now
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