"The Abyss Of Mind, Body, And Soul" By Alex Hornby aka TuNed RooT

This is quality poetry... I get a realistic feeling from it as if you're heart is writing it.. You should keep with this and maybe consider putting them in a song one day.. stay up homie


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"Only Time You May Be Open Minded Is Through This Art."

Yeah and sometimes people cant even do that. That line was great. The structure was great. Wordplay was dope. But most of the the message was strong. My first time reading some of your work. I hope i see more from you soon

one luv

look man...came here purely intent on returnin' the favor...but as a bonus, i got handed some jewels...

It's The Road From School To Occupational Jobs.
It's The Road From Being Once A Child.
To A Teenager.
To An Adult.
It's The Highway From "It's Your Fault, Not Mine!".
Then Changes With Maturity To "Maybe It Is Me, I Apologize.".

my favorite part of the peice...mainly cuz i'm in this transition now, so i can relate to this...

pretty nice -- i'm feeling this one a lot -- first peep from you and it's solid work -- touched a few senses

if you have speakers
http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread.php?s=&threadid=576685

lengthy, but worth it... great piece!