"The Abyss Of Mind, Body, And Soul" By Alex Hornby aka TuNed RooT

Discussion in 'Poetry Realm' started by TuNed RooT, May 25, 2003.

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  1. Untouchable 1126

    Untouchable 1126 New Member

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    This is quality poetry... I get a realistic feeling from it as if you're heart is writing it.. You should keep with this and maybe consider putting them in a song one day.. stay up homie


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  2. Mind~$oul

    Mind~$oul I'm Pretty

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    "Only Time You May Be Open Minded Is Through This Art."

    Yeah and sometimes people cant even do that. That line was great. The structure was great. Wordplay was dope. But most of the the message was strong. My first time reading some of your work. I hope i see more from you soon

    one luv
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  3. Jethro

    Jethro The Hemingway Of Rap

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    look man...came here purely intent on returnin' the favor...but as a bonus, i got handed some jewels...

    It's The Road From School To Occupational Jobs.
    It's The Road From Being Once A Child.
    To A Teenager.
    To An Adult.
    It's The Highway From "It's Your Fault, Not Mine!".
    Then Changes With Maturity To "Maybe It Is Me, I Apologize.".

    my favorite part of the peice...mainly cuz i'm in this transition now, so i can relate to this...
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  4. milLion

    milLion by way of Kansas City

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  5. *GeMiNeYeZ*

    *GeMiNeYeZ* ~§¤Sweet Shinobi¤§~

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    lengthy, but worth it... great piece!
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