That Place

Discussion in 'Poetry Realm' started by iLL Script., Feb 8, 2004.

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  1. glasspen

    glasspen Brooklyn Bitch

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    yo i threw my old shit on here for you to read its a little long but i had to. i wrote that with so much feeling, hate, love all that. you made me want to post it.this piece inspired me to post it.

    HOLLA AT YA GIRL!
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  2. shaft600

    shaft600 New Member

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    yeah can't knock sucess people give you credit well I'll just say

    rhyming bad sprees is like climbing sad trees, you wanna peek hot but never reach top //
    corrupt to get misused, upset and confused startle on the truth drink bottle 90 proof hot //
    scaly crews is like the daily news don’t broadcast true clout sometimes about crime //
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  3. MarQuise*

    MarQuise* Can You Hear Me*

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    I totally forgot to leave you feed on this, i Lv readin your stuff, its alwayz full of great content, brilliant imagery, emotions, the way i Lv poetry to be. Anywayz, this is no exception. This was Deep, Lv'd it.
    Much Lv
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  4. Tha Crippler

    Tha Crippler New Member

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    damn homeboy...gettin deep on me now..i still think ur moms & my dad ran off together..magnificent poem kid..

    (still think u can beat me in a rematch?)
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  5. iLL Script.

    iLL Script. ~Poetic~

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    thankz marquise, much appreciated. maybe we can collab sometime

    t. get ya ass back in tha gym den maybe maybe u can get a hit in lol
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  6. MarQuise*

    MarQuise* Can You Hear Me*

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    Whenever your ready... ;)
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  7. iLL Script.

    iLL Script. ~Poetic~

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    u got e-mail or AIM?
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  8. MarQuise*

    MarQuise* Can You Hear Me*

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    Check Your PM's.
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  9. iLL Script.

    iLL Script. ~Poetic~

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    got it, i sent ya somethin'
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  10. kyza soza

    kyza soza This way up.

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    piece was tight man...imagery was nice, a sort of dream liem, quality to it...flow was coo'...deep on the real...feelin the type ofemotions you seem to release in most of your drops that i've seen

    pz mayne

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    P.S...REMEMBER IM A MALE...LOL
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  11. Anglewing

    Anglewing New Member

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    Very nice it was short but very powerful. We all have that special place where we think about the past.
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