Discussion in 'Overtime: Off-Topic Discussion' started by Judgekure, Jul 1, 2011.
this leaned me so much, repped for this dude
hmmm thats not a key ring as much as its a key.
^ Fuck you.
Ya you're right tho.
lol, repped, gunna add a comment too. your bars were good but they were undeniably generic.
I said they were generic in my verse, so ya, I know.
Equitorial fauna mixed with java and salsa?
You know how hot that is?
Use imagery to imagine me sitting at a table somewhere in the Congo dining on some animal, topped with flaming salsa and washed down with some hot coffee.
which means they cud have been written for anyone. the personal wasn't bodybag but it was true and was a personal, i nameflipped mock turtle and did word play based on it. i also had good imagery and thought the closer was fire. plus the jamie bulger line was heavy as hell.
not mad at the decision, i think you may have edged it but was by no means a bodybag.
U have a THIN LABIA from MEN RAPING YA
Blow so much smoke u have DICK CHENEY LUNGS
U from LITHuANIA, I'll hit ur CHIN MAINLY UP
Then put u in the river like FINN SAILING (HUCK)
Plus u first came to this site like "SLIM SHADY, WHAT!!!"
grab you by the throat till I hear a HARSH GURGLE,
won't stop till your face is OFF-PURPLE
You're as hard as SOFT MYRTLE,
or the plants they cut away making CROP CIRCLES
You're getting bombed BADLY
tell them that you're NOT COLONEL
Edit: that was sick btw mock.
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