[Text Battle] Static "Break-a-" Legacy Vs TheProle

Discussion in 'Overtime: Off-Topic Discussion' started by Judgekure, Jun 13, 2011.

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Who do you think won?

  1. Static Legacy

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  1. JobOne

    JobOne Man of the Hour

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    Do the judges even know they are judging this battle?

    Maybe you guys should shoot them some PMs.
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  2. Gwame

    Gwame no luckycharms in ireland

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    Prole kinda had a weird flow. Wouldn't work over beat but it's easy enough to read.
    Some real raw lines and a pretty decent GS/EF reference.

    Static... Predictable rhymes and it sorta died down after the first part of the verse.

    Yeah, TheProle got this quite clearly IMO.
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  3. My Name Is Bob

    My Name Is Bob New Member

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    Vote: TheProle, imo

    I liked his material material and his lines hit hard, tbh.
    -Cave his top in like the MetroDome
    -Lane Kiffin, UTENN, USC
    -Smoke Cubans

    With Static, it looks like he was going for the 4 bar build-ups but some of them fell flat for me.
    I liked the "lift the heat up like current of convention"
    The "Iron/Jin" line was meh.

    But thats just me.

    BOB

    WADDUP.
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  4. chrishansen

    chrishansen Well-Known Member

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    TheProle won easily I could break this down but first of all that 07 partriots all I do is win is both incorrect and really corny how the fuck u don't even recite your verse and come off like a cornball wtf

    TheProle wins via textual bodybag
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  5. Eyerate

    Eyerate The Definition of Real..

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    my vote goes to the prole..

    im not going to get insane with the breakdown because its just text but i was sort of annoyed by some of the writing.. the brady line turned me off because of the superbowl bodybag. carbon fiber weapon/TSA detection was expensive, but that should have been a punchline.

    on the proles side.. can you explain this to me?

    why is that second line in there, and how does it even fit? i cant for the life of me imagine that being spit live and not going "wait.. what? that doesnt rhyme at all in any pattern.."

    otherwise i think prole was more consistent and had better content. the foreman/weak scheme was expensive. but there was a bit of slop on both sides. close battle. do you guys read these bars in performance form when writing them? if not, start.
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  6. TheProle

    TheProle Pls go, Milhouse.

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    Yea, about that bar... initially the bar was supposed to be kind of stop-pause, but I wanted to get an even amount of bars for my verse, so I put the stop-pause part onto the next line. Originally it was "murder-suicide..... I'm never going out alone./", but I bumped it down to the next line.

    I know it's pretty lazy, and sounds off. I had a derp moment there.
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  7. Static Legacy

    Static Legacy 3 times of a lotta shit

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    I say if this is the regular season then I'm the '07 patriots, they were undefeated in the regular season tbh.
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