Discussion in 'Overtime: Off-Topic Discussion' started by Judgekure, Jun 13, 2011.
Do the judges even know they are judging this battle?
Maybe you guys should shoot them some PMs.
Prole kinda had a weird flow. Wouldn't work over beat but it's easy enough to read.
Some real raw lines and a pretty decent GS/EF reference.
Static... Predictable rhymes and it sorta died down after the first part of the verse.
Yeah, TheProle got this quite clearly IMO.
Vote: TheProle, imo
I liked his material material and his lines hit hard, tbh.
-Cave his top in like the MetroDome
-Lane Kiffin, UTENN, USC
With Static, it looks like he was going for the 4 bar build-ups but some of them fell flat for me.
I liked the "lift the heat up like current of convention"
The "Iron/Jin" line was meh.
But thats just me.
TheProle won easily I could break this down but first of all that 07 partriots all I do is win is both incorrect and really corny how the fuck u don't even recite your verse and come off like a cornball wtf
TheProle wins via textual bodybag
my vote goes to the prole..
im not going to get insane with the breakdown because its just text but i was sort of annoyed by some of the writing.. the brady line turned me off because of the superbowl bodybag. carbon fiber weapon/TSA detection was expensive, but that should have been a punchline.
on the proles side.. can you explain this to me?
why is that second line in there, and how does it even fit? i cant for the life of me imagine that being spit live and not going "wait.. what? that doesnt rhyme at all in any pattern.."
otherwise i think prole was more consistent and had better content. the foreman/weak scheme was expensive. but there was a bit of slop on both sides. close battle. do you guys read these bars in performance form when writing them? if not, start.
Yea, about that bar... initially the bar was supposed to be kind of stop-pause, but I wanted to get an even amount of bars for my verse, so I put the stop-pause part onto the next line. Originally it was "murder-suicide..... I'm never going out alone./", but I bumped it down to the next line.
I know it's pretty lazy, and sounds off. I had a derp moment there.
I say if this is the regular season then I'm the '07 patriots, they were undefeated in the regular season tbh.
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