terrible but kinda funny

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  1. T.R.C....

    T.R.C.... New Member

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    illicit substances may have been involved in the creation of the following masterpiece....of crap....enjoy

    i dont need to freestyle when my writtens will crack you like cheap tile
    snarl with my teeth filed then stand over you face an release bile
    buryin bodies in a deep bayou this shit'll amaze you on each fly through
    i just dont give it up or give a fuck when i spit a rhyme after sniffin dust
    appearance is nerdy but i'll still rip it shit im suck locked in rap mode
    after i smack a fat hoe with the bat phone i'll grab a hatchet an hack bones
    its a fact yo i dont know where this is headed but it isnt pleasant
    the next rhyme escapes the present toss it out like evicted tenants
    wether or not it fits the sentence it stinks i think its rancid
    to frighten the monsters in my closet i called marilyn manson
    i just cant be beat gamble with a life to make the ante steep
    servin cats on a silver platter now thats a fancy feast



    http://board.rapmusic.com/open-mic/1235908-flood-coming-soon.html
    http://board.rapmusic.com/open-mic/1235694-omg-funny-scrolls-theoracle-ofomen-gets-called-out.html
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  2. dsp2k5

    dsp2k5 Dime Sack Pimp

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    lol ... nice drop homie ... nice ...

    and u told me u aint that good ... every drop i see from you is dope ... you are your own worst enemy sometimes, homie ... your rhymes aint nuthin I would be holdin my head down about ...
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  3. T.R.C....

    T.R.C.... New Member

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    thanks man and hopefully that will help some of the other stuff i posted thats yet to be commented on here get some replies
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  4. lyricalpriest

    lyricalpriest Rap Games Dawson Creek

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    I dont understand why u put those lnks there... But as for ur drop, pretty sharp my nuqqa!
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  5. dsp2k5

    dsp2k5 Dime Sack Pimp

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    what links?
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  6. T.R.C....

    T.R.C.... New Member

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    the two links that say the flood comin soon and the oracle thing what are they not showin up or somethin?
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  7. Chase Murda

    Chase Murda hostile enviroment

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    this shit was aight but u need to step it up a notch
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  8. lyricalpriest

    lyricalpriest Rap Games Dawson Creek

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    ya so whats up with those links??
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  9. T.R.C....

    T.R.C.... New Member

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    chase you mind elaborating on that what do i need to work on and priest the fucking links are there because we are required to reply to two other threads before we can post our own and ive already replied to a lot of the threads in here those were the two most recent at the time so i chose those
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