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Discussion in 'Open Mic' started by lyricalpriest, Sep 14, 2010.

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  1. lyricalpriest

    lyricalpriest Rap Games Dawson Creek

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    where did u go?
    i wanna know where did u go....

    <>sHaTtErD sOuL<>

    I know where u went & my time spent with out u aint worth a cent..

    better yet-never the less things just aint the same...

    when all i have left is just a picture in a frame, and these memories
    in my brain..

    slowly turning me insane, and ya its all bad..........

    but thats just the way it goes, and ya im all sad...

    but thats not gonna change shit so, there u go...

    even tho it doesnt feel natural, at the end of the road i will hafta let u
    go....

    i been tryna stay strong, even tho you always gone im all alone and occaisonaly
    pace thru my home for the phone is it wrong?

    the only way i can communicate 2 u is thru a poem, gettin shit off my chest
    is the only thing that keeps me calm..

    but yet the pain goes on and on and on......

    DEDICATED TO MY FIRST BM! EVEN THO U GONE U STAY IN MY HEART! IF U ONLY KNEW HOW I FEALT.. BUT LIFE GOES ON, THIS SHIT DONT STOP..
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  2. T.R.C....

    T.R.C.... New Member

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    pretty cool man flowed together nicely kept on topic you should have made it a bit longer though
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  3. lyricalpriest

    lyricalpriest Rap Games Dawson Creek

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    thnx TRC... juss was in the mood to bless the mic...or the text.. haha
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  4. nO gOoD!

    nO gOoD! Life Music :: Press Play

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    pretty decent. I like the fact that it was something heartfelt and not just blabbing about some battle topic
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  5. lyricalpriest

    lyricalpriest Rap Games Dawson Creek

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    thats why i posted it bc everyone keeps talkin about the same shit.. about how sucky at writing i am and how they wanna watch me molest little kids, and how they are like super lyrically inclined.. and tbh.. the write like shit.. and tbh.. i have a very diverse style, and tbh, i ahate battling but i got the site shook for now, even tho they wanna act like i cant write a battle.. whatever.. homos
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  6. dsp2k5

    dsp2k5 Dime Sack Pimp

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    Well done. Nailed this one homie.
    Posted via Mobile Device
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  7. lyricalpriest

    lyricalpriest Rap Games Dawson Creek

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    thanx bruh bruh
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  8. Arsenic P

    Arsenic P A.K.A. PROPOSITION P

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    good shit like no good said i too like that fact that you actually put this shit out,cuz ta be reall everybody here prolly write shit like this on a regular but are afraid of what the critque's might say to put it out,good drop homie.
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  9. lyricalpriest

    lyricalpriest Rap Games Dawson Creek

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    thanx P! thats why i dropped it bc i wanted to show my versitality.. more too come famalam!
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  10. TACOMA253BRNRZD

    TACOMA253BRNRZD New Member

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    yo this shit is tight.. this nigga priest is mad consistant at touching topics and beasting on them
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  11. rohnrtprkplyboy

    rohnrtprkplyboy New Member

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    whats realy goin on g
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  12. lyricalpriest

    lyricalpriest Rap Games Dawson Creek

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