Take Me Away (Esoteric)

Discussion in 'Post Ya Audios & Videos Here! - feedback forum' started by Mepsyiah, Jun 27, 2006.

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  1. ILL SEEKAH

    ILL SEEKAH Deaf to Depths of Death..

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    Nice track.....feelin the content.....first mc is nice, good lyrics, nice flow....very smooth over the beat...the hook is nice. 2nd mc is nice, might need a lil more work but not bad... I like the track overall. Keep doing ya'lls thing.


    Peace and God Bless
    test
  2. Mepsyiah

    Mepsyiah Prophecy

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    thanks alot for the feedback..keep it comin people
    test
  3. :Cold-Spits:

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    Returning The Feed

    Nice track.....feelin it.....first dude is nice, nice lyrics, flow is on point ...Feeling it ...the hook is dope 2nd dude is coo, flow is coo delivery is aiight lyrics are coo ...need a lil work but its nice.....overall nice track.....


    thx for the feed man
    test
  4. Mepsyiah

    Mepsyiah Prophecy

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    no prob thanks for the feed.....keep it comin
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  5. Mepsyiah

    Mepsyiah Prophecy

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    gonna keep upppin this til me and my boy drop another track together....come on leave links and ill rtf
    test
  6. Mepsyiah

    Mepsyiah Prophecy

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    thats fucked up....where's my rtf's?
    test
  7. TWO M.C.S

    TWO M.C.S New Member

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    sorry i skimmed right over this homie - this track wasnt bad, beats not bad, flows are alright, i think the first cat is a little bit more polished up than the second dude - both got pretty ill voices - decent presence

    not a bad cut here

    keep droppin em yo!
    test
  8. Mepsyiah

    Mepsyiah Prophecy

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    thanks for the feedback fam..keep it comin...
    test
  9. Rico2012

    Rico2012 New Member

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    first cat is pretty dope...lyrics are good...delivery's very relaxed...I think a "little" more emotion'd be tight...kinda like you did on the hook...hook's tight.

    2nd cat needs a little more work on delivery...maybe confidence? idk...it almost sounds like he's reading it instead of reciting it, u know? lyrics are alright, tho.


    beat's pretty tight...I like it.

    overall, nice track


    I don't have anything current but if u wanna go to my myspace or soundclick and listen be my guest.

    I like that 'sagada' song on the myspace...I tried to add u but it's "undergoing routine maintainence" and won't let me log-in...but yea...good stuff
    test
  10. Mepsyiah

    Mepsyiah Prophecy

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    thanks for the feedback...keep it comin
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  11. Mepsyiah

    Mepsyiah Prophecy

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    dont die on me now...keep it comin!!
    test
  12. Mepsyiah

    Mepsyiah Prophecy

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    uppppiinnn bout to leave f-ee-d on some peoples work but if you view this drop some feedback and ill be glad to rtf for you :)
    test
  13. Mepsyiah

    Mepsyiah Prophecy

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  14. Mepsyiah

    Mepsyiah Prophecy

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    im back from vacation and ready for feedback :)
    test
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