Take Me Away (Esoteric)

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  1. Blak

    Blak Producer Of the Year

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  2. Mepsyiah

    Mepsyiah Prophecy

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    thanks for all the feedback...keep it comin..gonna hit up them links...if not right now...then asap..
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  3. Battlefields

    Battlefields Swaggin' On You

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    I like the beat
    fidelity your ripping this on hook and the verse clean flow
    had energy something missing though i cant put my finger on it
    not feeling prophecy weak energy delivery the whole 9
    nice track though fidelity you put this joint on your back

    http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread.php?p=13773554#post13773554

    hit me back
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  4. Mepsyiah

    Mepsyiah Prophecy

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    how and the hell am i lackin presence the WHISPERING IS FOR THE FUCKING PRESENCE damn...its a depressin track the whisperin is for the presence for the depression feel..


    but i got alot of good feedback so its whatever
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  5. Mepsyiah

    Mepsyiah Prophecy

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    wheres my rtf's at?
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  6. Mepsyiah

    Mepsyiah Prophecy

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    yall sleepin....showin no love...
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  7. Mr. Manager

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    beat is fucking FIRE. seriously, this shit is crazy...

    i'm listening but you guys really need to polish up. dont sound too comfortable on the mic, just freestyle everyday.

    this track is fucking beautiful though
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  8. Mr. Manager

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    oh, and i saw the question you asked about why we are commenting on your presence...you don't have enough conviction in your voice. even though you're whispering you still don't sound polished...like, there is still a certain energy you can project with this type of delivery and you didn't pull it off.

    just hope that cleared everything up
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  9. .:AC:.

    .:AC:. Smokes or Bananas

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  10. Nick HaTT

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    this was tuff, thanks for the reply..
    feelin the realness on this, nice to hear something like this,
    stay up fam
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  11. Mepsyiah

    Mepsyiah Prophecy

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    thanks for the feedback....ill get at that link sometime tomorrow fam
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  12. Mepsyiah

    Mepsyiah Prophecy

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    oh yeah...thanks for helpin me clear that up alittle to mr. manager....
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  13. Mepsyiah

    Mepsyiah Prophecy

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    ....um...all them peoples threads i left feed on the other day...and no one can fuckin return it...wow...
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  14. Fast Flow Productions

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    aight peeping got another track for you to peep tooo

    http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread.php?t=991893

    woah this beat is so epic like some shit that belongs in halo....

    this song is like something that that something u hear when your in heaven or something lol

    first dude is pretty straight as fuck.......

    second dude was off beat on some parts get that flow better....

    this song is just depressing me lol damn. lol this beat and the lyrics i just wanna cry lol j/p

    take me to a place where the grass is green i need one something i gotta find in me take me back to the days when my heart was young. back to the days before it all begun

    i love that fuckin chorus yo really good shit......

    u should play that chorus twice at the end when it plays the last time play it twice... and that outro is like the end of the fuckin movie .....

    shit was wild that beat is so fuckin vivid good shit...


    anwyas peep my other joint

    good listen imma bump it again for the chours

    hollab ack
    joe
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  15. Mepsyiah

    Mepsyiah Prophecy

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    thanks for the feedback....im gonna piss on my flow...hahaahah take a diaherra shit on it.....ill peep ya track
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  16. Mepsyiah

    Mepsyiah Prophecy

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    ive upped this damn track so much....cuz im tired of leavin feed for people and them not RTF for me...so im gonna keep uppin til i drop another track with my boy aaahahahahahaha
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  17. Mepsyiah

    Mepsyiah Prophecy

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    uppin again cuz im stupid....uppin this mufucka
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  18. Mepsyiah

    Mepsyiah Prophecy

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    see fuck leavin others feed man..i didnt get my rtf's...
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  19. ?.?.?.?

    ?.?.?.? Not a Critic Just a Fan

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    nice track
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  20. Mepsyiah

    Mepsyiah Prophecy

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    thanks fam keep it up
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