Take Me Away (Esoteric)

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  1. Mepsyiah

    Mepsyiah Prophecy

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    this is a track me and my boy did...as a group called Esoteric...very very deep emotional track...very very good...please check this and leave good feed...

    Fidelity-verse 1
    Fidelity-hook
    Prophecy-verse 2
    Fidelity-hook
    Fidelity- first half of verse 3
    Prophecy- second half of verse 3
    Fidelity- on hook and ending..


    please check...drop links and ill rtf for sure....



    Take Me Away (Soundclick)


    Take Me Away (Myspace)
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  2. Red304

    Red304 iLL Tactics ENT

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    1st off thx 4 the feed ... to the song beat nice flow on point emotion there slips a lil not bad tho lyrics deep i enjoyed this shit and im feelin that hook keep droppin this shit
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  3. mocha_licious

    mocha_licious New Member

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    returning tha feed...
    aiight beats on some mellow ish...
    delivery and voice is dope flows good beat riding is good sounds like U have a quiet confidence in ya delivery...content is pretty good swagger is ok....
    production could come up in my personal opinion but other then that nice ish fam
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  4. Mepsyiah

    Mepsyiah Prophecy

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    thanks for all the feedback keep it comin fam....
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  5. Mepsyiah

    Mepsyiah Prophecy

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    comeeeeeeeeooooooonnnnnnnnnn ppppppppeeeeeeeoooooooppppplllllleeeeeee dont zzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz
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  6. Mepsyiah

    Mepsyiah Prophecy

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    come on feeedback people
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  7. strace

    strace New Member

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    You know theres already a rapper named Esoteric right?


    Well, anyways the first dude was nice i was feeling what he was saying..
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  8. Mepsyiah

    Mepsyiah Prophecy

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    thanks and yes i know...and people who bitched bout it got the myspace page erased knowing i said when we thought up a new name we were gonna change it but wtfever man...all them plays and shit we had gone cuz of some stupid bitches....

    but thanks...ill let him know...big uppin this shit
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  9. Mepsyiah

    Mepsyiah Prophecy

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    people cant even return favors anymore....
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  10. Mepsyiah

    Mepsyiah Prophecy

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    people dont sleep on this track man.....come on..leave links ill gladly rtf.....
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  11. BilCosbynDZK

    BilCosbynDZK www.myspace.com/techomega

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    whats good fam

    hmmm production of the beat....i wasn't really feeling that much

    you came ill and so did your boy i hear alot of energy in the flows no doubt and i liked how you guys decided to tag team the whole track that concept is real doubt...you dont see much of it on the net though

    good content very solid im def liking this track

    stay and up and hit me wit sum feedback
    http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread.php?t=994553
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  12. Mepsyiah

    Mepsyiah Prophecy

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    thanks alot for the feedback ....keep it comin
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  13. Mepsyiah

    Mepsyiah Prophecy

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    ....sleepin on my track ...son....COME ON RTF IF YOU LEAVE LINKS
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  14. KamikazeLyricist

    KamikazeLyricist The Kamikaze Lyricist

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    returnin the feed .......... Im lovin this beat ............ flows steadt jus seemed like it lacked emotion or a switch in delivery to give it a different effect ......... this overall is soundin good jus needs a lil polishin on certain areas .... vocals were too low too ....... I'll look out for youre next joint Pz

    -Kamikaze Lyricist ð
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  15. Mepsyiah

    Mepsyiah Prophecy

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    thanks for the feedback keep it comin
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    FinesseNY A.I Gang

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  17. Mepsyiah

    Mepsyiah Prophecy

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    thanks for the feedback...ill get at your link soon....
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  18. Mepsyiah

    Mepsyiah Prophecy

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    dont sleep fam....leave links and i will rtf
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  19. TOOBxSOCKS

    TOOBxSOCKS Code of the Samurai

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    returnin the feed:

    beats smooth yo..i like it....

    1st dood:
    flows mad smooth....lyrics are on some deep shit....delivery on point...doods reminds me of nas....this hooks aight....

    2nd dood:
    flows shaky.....lil slow for the beat too....lyrics were aight....
    2nd hooks cool...

    overall shit was nice yo....second dood could use some work...wasnt bad though...
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  20. Junq

    Junq aka Junqtion

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    http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread.php?t=995369


    aight first verse: i like the flow a lot, and im feelin it but i think the delivery seems a little too forced

    second verse: flow needs work, gotta get some experiance

    i think this was ok, as a song it was pretty cool, i like what yall are doin, i like the lyrics, the feeling, i dont like the beat too much, but im feelin what this is about...
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