TAB --- "718" Snippet Off The Upcoming Mixtape --- Drop Links

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  1. TAB

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    I've been deprived of motivation and inspiration these past few months, but last night I got myself together and finally recorded something. This remix will be going on my upcoming mixtape/album. The complete song will be posted next week once I record the second part. Drop links and insightful feedback.

    Top joint on the page --- http://www.soundclick.com/artist/5/peepingtom_music.htm

    LYRICS


    Mwah.
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  2. SHITTY Bang Bang

    SHITTY Bang Bang freestyle fanatic

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    FAG!!


    uuuuumm....



    stop spitting fast...try new things ... like i said im not really feeling the fast toung...

    good lyrics tho..


    i unno maybe its just me... slow it down :)


    hello
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  3. ceson

    ceson ....Ceson Wordz

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    this is ight...remind me of tonedeff alil but..idk...this was different flow wise...lyrics was good i liekd that...delivery was good..quality was pretty good...props..this was pretty good

    return the feedback..peep my thread
    http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread.php?t=917503
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  4. SpoonFull

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    damn man, your flow is speedy. Your voice is monotone, but that works really well with your style and delivery. Shit is laid back and fast....a dope combo. You still remind me of Eligh.....always will. I like the lyrics. Having an extensive vocabulary is always a plus. The emceeing on this was grade A in my opinion, you're one of my favorate cats off RM, but I think you could lower the vocals a tad bit. Other than that, shit was DOPEness. I wish you had room for a 2nd verse :-(

    1love, spooner
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  5. syllabusta

    syllabusta I am Phonetical Nonsense

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    not to hate but it sounds like a white guy doing an Andre impression...wasnt really feeling but if you clean up ur flow it might be tighter...alittle more work on ur flow and youll be dope...
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  6. V.I.K

    V.I.K The Feedback Returner

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    The fast flow, is tight. But i can understand next to nothing that you're saying. You get props for it, cuz that shit is dumb hard to do. But its kinda pointless if no one can understand it nah mean? Well done hook. The way its doubled up, and panned out. Nice. For future reference, u should double up a few of ya lines. And do some adlibs. With your rapid fire style, that shit would be hot. Cuz it would only add hype, and more things to keep people interested and listening. Keep writing. 1

    Get at me...
    http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread.php?t=917450
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  7. TAB

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    Thanks homie...I'll get at your link in a few minutes after this high wears out.
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  8. E_Spangler

    E_Spangler GHOstBuStaH

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    sup man.....ohh damn, this beat is sick shit, whats the name of it??.....ur double time flow has gotten better from the last time i peeped u, which was like 6 months ago lol...ur ridin the beat better, but there's still room for improvement....lyrics are soundin pretty good....delivery sounds the same, monotone n shit, but i kinda like it like that lol....ummm, yeah, overall, this is a pretty cool song....keep spittin n elevatin man...peace
    -EGON

    ayo, whenever u get a chance, peep my shit:

    http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread.php?t=916366
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  9. TAB

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    Great feed from you both. Links have been returned.
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  10. Fernelity

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    Flows sick, voice sucks though

    Everythings fine, just don't spit monotone. If you can't spit fast with emotion, then don't spit fast. It really brings down the track.

    Other than that, your flow sounds fine being speedy, and your quality's fine. Nothing wrong with the track aside from the monotone.
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  14. Rivalry

    Rivalry chyea.

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    thanks for checking my shit

    shittt i havent heard a fast rapper in a while, i like the hook. the verse works well and i like the monotone. i know people gave their opionions on the fast rap but imma just say do you cause if thats what you like that cool. i like your voice and style. keep doin it up..theres room for improvement still in the fast flow but its gettin there.

    anyway cool joint right here
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  15. Verbatim

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    aiiight...I always loved this beat....your flow reminds me of Chucke....for some bars it real hard to follow and understand...delivery fit the beat..lyrics(from what I heard) were pretty cool...nice hook...pretty cool joint overall
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  16. TAB

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  17. Hibernation

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    BROOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOKLYN STANNNNNNNNNND UUUUUUUUUUUUUP!

    Your Flow An Voice Is Dope.. Wooo.. I Love The Way Ur Flow Works With The Voice, Kinda Reminds Me Of This One Dude On Here, Chucke I Think? Just Up Ur Mic Presence, It Sounds Like U Werent Too Interested, Nawmean?
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  19. Mizz Tres

    Mizz Tres Ur woman loves me =/

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    I never listened to you before but anyways..


    Flow is nice as hell, voice is arigh. You sound kinda monotone like youre reading but if you add a lil bit of emotion it'd be even better. Lyrics is coo, from what i could grasp anyway lol.


    thx for the feed.
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