Discussion in 'Post Ya Audios & Videos Here! - feedback forum' started by Imperial, Aug 13, 2006.
its a hard track wit a DOPE beat by Cire.. I feel its my best track yet
listenin , alotta pops , flow was cool , beats dope , Overall not bad yo
Yo whatup. Lyrics were cool. Starting line was good. Think the mixing coulda been better, not sure what kinda mic your were usin. I can hear fuzz, it ruins the song. Also i think you coulda used some backups. It'd help with the mic problem i think. keep doin your thing and movin up.
Damn, I wanted to return the favor. Unfortunately DMUSIC won't stream for me. Let me know if you can upload somewhere else.
Upping this for people who can listen though.
Alllriiiiiiiiiiight lets see
Beats pretty chill. I like it, Id probably spit to something like this its a bit different but meh. Message youre sending with your lyrics is on point man, no bullshit I like that. No hook but whatev. Lol@nodding off.. Quality is a little off.. or you need a pop filter or something like that, but all in all youre on a good vibe and Im feeling it, stay up dogg.
Return the favor when you have a chance,
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Aight.....beat's cool, but for some reason it didn't sound well done, like it was coming through a tape deck or something. Anyway, flow was on. I think maybe it was just that your vocals were a little too high for the beat. Your lyrics were pretty nice. I liked how you came into the second verse. Only thing I would fix was lowering your vocals......good shit.
Returning the feedback
The beat got kind of annoying with that vocal sample, but anyway you definitely need to invest in a pop filter, cause you got alot of pops in your song.
I like the lyrics, and the delivery was pretty smooth, the flow fell off a few times, but you picked it up later on in the song..
Overall this was pretty good, you definitely got potential...peace
yeah, this aight..and like everyone said, get a pop filter..lol, that shit is annoying.
but yeah, lyrics are good, had a few punches in there i liked. i like he beat, not really my style but you used it good.
beats sick i got this 1 downloaded
wow theres a shitload of popping lol get a pop filter or new equipment i dont know lol
likin the content lyrics are nice flow is decent voice has potential delivery needs some polishing
thanks yall... up
returnin that favor... shits decent, feelin the beat..flow was cool, deliv. cool.. could use a lil polishin here in there, some dope lyrics, lol get a pop filter! lol but i can dig it man.. get at me..
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