Surviving.

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  1. GaLaTeA

    GaLaTeA Well-Known Member

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    Taking leaps makes you alive,
    jumping with care from the last ledge,
    to the first tip of a new point,
    untill fulfilment is reached,
    until a change is possible,
    from stranger to a friend,
    from stranger to a lover,
    from spouse to a responsible parent,
    living a life without losing yourself,
    without becoming someone new,
    somebody else,
    no more hidding from hurricanes and storms,
    yet standing strong from seed to a plant,
    and back to seed again,
    living means forgetting death,
    taking breath's momentum,
    which should be enough,
    but it's not.
    Living sometimes means barely surviving.
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  2. Shadow

    Shadow Kotaro's Master

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    This was a nice little read. Not much depth to it but it read smoothly and i liked your wording. Good work
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  3. GaLaTeA

    GaLaTeA Well-Known Member

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    ^^Thanks so much....I'm still learning as I go...=)
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    NOBLE SOLDIER Fireball Kid

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    Shad's right.. We talked about it.. but i wanted to read it.. didnt know you posted it..
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    Coup d'état Don't believe the hype

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    this was good. you have elements of connections that I feel most wish they had.
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  6. GaLaTeA

    GaLaTeA Well-Known Member

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    Wow, thank you so much.
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    Thrilla-Ali Dapper Don

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