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  1. Fernelity

    Fernelity Active Member

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  2. Emation

    Emation SPREAD THE iLLNESS

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    What's up listening to this: flow is pretty nice, mic prensence could use a little work though. Quality also needs some work your lyrics are really low. I like your style it's real unique and got a good vibe to it. Like how you tied all those drugs into your song hahah, that's tight & reminds me of last night. Yeah so that shit is tight, keep doing your thing, please return the favor to my link in my sig.
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  3. KamikazeLyricist

    KamikazeLyricist The Kamikaze Lyricist

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    listenin ... I remember you battlin Ill Chris , then I got em next round ...
    you need more emotion in youre delivery ... vocals seem a lil low for this ...
    I mean this aint bad jus needs polishin BUT weall need that no matter who it is ...
    Overall not bad son Hit up mine

    http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread.php?t=930780
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  4. Fernelity

    Fernelity Active Member

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    Got your links, more feedback please.
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    beat is niceness. I like it. Vocals are a little bit low. I like ur laid back delivery a lot. only 16? damn dude. dope. You've got some ill lines in this. I mean, this is dope and all but work a tad on your rhymescheme structure and you'll be nice as hell. Esp. at 16...you've got plenty of time to get better. Dope shit all around tho, nice.

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  6. Charlie_Br0wn

    Charlie_Br0wn (Creative Alias Here)

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    Nice...Jurassic Five Beat.

    Vocals Are Kinda Low But They Still Clear...Lyrics Are Sick Man. Feeling This Shit...Flow Is Nice Too. Fuckkk...I'm Definately Feeling This Shit Man. Your Flow Is Dope...Feeling The Delivery. This Shit Is Dope.

    Wo0t...Crazy Shit Man. Straight Lyrical Shit.

    Return The Favor? http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread.php?t=931004
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  7. Fernelity

    Fernelity Active Member

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    I'll get your link when I get home from work Charlie.
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  8. Tha Artful Scrybe

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    listenin--

    yer voice is gettin drowned just a little...you're flow compliments the beat...you kill it at a couple of spots...content doesn't really demand attention tho...like the clip...and liked the little hook joint at the end...decent post...i'd just say up the quality, really...keep spittin...

    return the favor:
    http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread.php?t=930454

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  9. Fernelity

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  10. Fernelity

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    Elvation yet again friend
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