summer tourney RD 2: 07- insanity V 32- liquidlife

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  1. Vern Acular

    Vern Acular 12x RSTL Champ

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  2. bigKEN

    bigKEN Hoosier Daddy??

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    chin checkin in...

    g'luck homie
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  3. Jersey_Emcee

    Jersey_Emcee aka LiQuiDliFe

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    <----LiQuiDliFe


    g'luck and please show
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  4. Jersey_Emcee

    Jersey_Emcee aka LiQuiDliFe

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    01- drug abuse
    02- casual sex
    03- club life
    04- beach week
    05- insomnia
    06- war
    07- teen pregnancy
    08- heaven & hell
    09- rapmusic.com
    10- guilty conscience



    couldnt decide on one....so i'll use them all





    No need for an introduction...we already know eachother well
    Through papers, needles and nostrils...we've been to heaven and hell
    We've had our fair share of hoe's...look at all the victims
    We use to pimp so many bitches...fuck em' and never kiss them
    I lost count how many girls...maybe those drugs were a factor
    There is one that sticks out...that we met at that club "Disaster"
    I believe it was spring break...with many hoes to choose from
    Her leather skirt was tighter than rubber....to bad i didnt use one
    We clicked instantly after a casual fuck along the water
    Then it clicked...how this story now involves our daughter
    And theres a war going on inside...and my body is losing
    But you dont care...you just like to get high and fuck im assuming
    You like to fuck chicks and joke about it on message boards
    Ha...dont get scared now kid....whats the weapon for?
    I've been telling you all along man...you did this to ya self
    Now the most deadly disease known to man is attacking ya health
    But dont listen to me...your the one that did this
    "Share the news" with your girl....you know, the one you "clicked with"
    All those times your were lost up in pussy and so addicted
    I was the voice in ya head giving oppertunity kid...but u missed it
    Im your conscience man...and this suicide note is twisted
    How do you feel about AIDS...the disease your wife and kid live with??
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  5. bigKEN

    bigKEN Hoosier Daddy??

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    casual sex

    Another late night at the studio, wrappin up tracks
    Skies overcast; moon light can barely pass in the cracks
    I glance at a lamp, as it flickers shadows dance in its cast
    Strapped for cash, so there’s no chance at catchin a cab
    I happen to pass, that bad path where fiends come and find
    Crack and Amphetamines through means of guns and knives
    The alley’s dangerous but the streets seem numb to crime
    I should be fine, I’ve made this walk at least a dozen times
    Head straight forward, too scared to look at my left
    I hear muffled screams and pleads, but yet I’m actin deaf
    Two men huddling, don’t wanna see what happens next
    As they touch subtly, an undressed girls ass and breasts
    I snapped I guess, she was too young to be depraved this way
    I made my way, towards the rape I had to save the day
    As I drew closer, I could hear her tryin to strain and pray
    Hearin her say, “Dear God, why? I embraced the faith”
    “Take this pain…”
    that’s when he stuck his dick in her mouth
    He was equipped to turn out, any chick who spit the sperm out
    He was a full-sized dude, prolly played the o-line in high school
    Blocked the nickel and the dime too, now used to get high to
    And his scrawny accomplice, wasn’t quite starting on offense
    More like the waterboy, who sat warming the knots-in
    The bench, cocky responses from behind his big friend
    From the dumpster he watches, her slob his tip end
    Couldn’t wait to dig in, that’s when I made my emergence
    From shadowed curtains, I surfaced, and gave a disturbance
    The scrawny kid just ran, while I was punchin and kickin his man
    There I was hittin this man, who still had his dick in his hand
    The fight ensued, and of course the big dude’s gonna lose
    If the bad guy wins, boo… what’s that end gonna prove??
    The end of the scene this, lean chick curled like a fetus
    Turns 16 in a week-it’s, a tragedy to see-this
    Queen bruisded and beaten, wounds seepin wit semen
    One dude’s knocked out sleepin, the others no where to be seen-when
    She looks at me screamin, “What the fuck were you thinkin?
    Things where so sweet-then, for some reason you came out swingin!!
    I need cream to eat-and, it’s plain that I need
    The Franklins paid when, I play in, his rape fantasy”

    Stunned and appalled-it’s, my fault-this bitch is bust for cash??
    So I stole a hundred from his wallet… and fucked her ass
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  6. Jersey_Emcee

    Jersey_Emcee aka LiQuiDliFe

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    how gay is that?....and your late too homie....its way past 9pm
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  7. LeeHarveyOswald

    LeeHarveyOswald I Rape Children

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    verses are due THURSDAY @ 9pm eastern


    he posted at 8:54
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  8. Jersey_Emcee

    Jersey_Emcee aka LiQuiDliFe

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    no he didn't....he posted later than that....
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  9. LeeHarveyOswald

    LeeHarveyOswald I Rape Children

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    07-17-2003, 08:54 PM


    [dunno]


    just tryin to help clear things up fellas
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  10. Jersey_Emcee

    Jersey_Emcee aka LiQuiDliFe

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    hmmm.....my shit says he posted @ 954....yikes....let me throw a verse 2gether
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  11. Jersey_Emcee

    Jersey_Emcee aka LiQuiDliFe

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    uppin for votes
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  12. bigKEN

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    I checked in.... that's usually a pre-indicator that I'm gonna show

    except for the RBL this week... that one ain't happening
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  13. Complete Chaos

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    liquidlife - nice verse... good imagery.. and vocab, nice twist at the end...

    insanity - very nice, the imagery was great, i could see what was happenin in my head, and i didnt care to read all of it... nice twist at the end too

    vote - insanity
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  14. Jersey_Emcee

    Jersey_Emcee aka LiQuiDliFe

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    i just want to bring to Vern's attention that Insanitys verse is over the bar limit
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  15. Vern Acular

    Vern Acular 12x RSTL Champ

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    im going with insanity on this one, i like how liquid incorporated every topic but it threw away the effect on your verse, maybe if you kept one and went with that it may have been diff, dont get me wrong, the verse was nice, but i had nothing to go off of, on the other hand insanity your verse was nice, the imagery was great, pretty vivid, and it had a nice flow, everything fit together perfectly, props to both , but my vote goes to...


    insanity
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  16. Jersey_Emcee

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  17. bigKEN

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    your verse was edited AFTER the past due limit...

    Vern's rules... 9 PM Eastern

    your original verse was:

    1bar
    2 bars
    3 bars
    4 bars...

    so either Vern can DQ us both or in the spirit of good competition let peeps vote
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  18. Macabre

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    If you're still countin votes

    J Emcee-
    Had a nice verse, especially the rhyme scheme and flow. You didn't pick a topic, which hurt a little, but the way you did it was nice. But since you did pick ALL of them, you didn't use all of them. I didn't see insomnia or rapmusic.com in there.

    Insanity-
    Had some very nice imagery. Stayed on topic well. Could've used more vocab but you got ya point across pretty well. Nice job on the topic.

    Vote-Insanity, had a nice verse as said above. J emcee's was nice but it lacked in topic, so it didn't have the imagery or anything that Insanity's did.
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  19. Vern Acular

    Vern Acular 12x RSTL Champ

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    since you both did actually post, i let the voting continue, i didn't want another DQ, regardless of bar limit, and seeing that he did post on time there's no reason really for me to DQ anyone, so the person with the most votes advances and that's insanity


    insanity goes to the 3rd round
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  20. Jersey_Emcee

    Jersey_Emcee aka LiQuiDliFe

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    yo thats some bullshit Vern.....he wnet over the bar limit....he should have been DQ'd from the door....

    The only reason i edited late was because i thought he was gonna no show..then he posted 4 minutes before the deadline....YOUR rules says that the max bar lilmit was 32....he went 40....so how does he advance....


    I think you should let us battle again in round 3...this is totally unfair
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