Lojak- Had a nice verse, very nice vocabulary. People say it was more like a battle verse, and it kinda was, but it also fit the topic(egotism). Had a very nice flow to it, nothing really wrong with the verse in my opinion. Although, I do feel you changed the subject a couple times(like the valum and anti depressants line) Demik- Nice verse all around. Didn't have the vocab that Lojak did, but had some crazy metaphors. Stuck to the topic the whole time and had some nice concepts. One major complaint I have is the flow, but since it's hard to judge a text flow, I dont. Vote- Demik, a nice verse. If Lojak would've stuck to the topci just a little more, and had a metaphor or two, he would've gotten the vote. Not a bad verrse frome either participant.