summer tourney: 06- LOJAK v 27- LEEHARVEYOSWALD

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  1. Vern Acular

    Vern Acular 12x RSTL Champ

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  2. LeeHarveyOswald

    LeeHarveyOswald I Rape Children

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    bitch motherfucker
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  3. _Lojak_

    _Lojak_ Dont Overlook Me

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    blah
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  4. LeeHarveyOswald

    LeeHarveyOswald I Rape Children

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    im finnin to grill some grits up in this



    whodi
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  5. _Lojak_

    _Lojak_ Dont Overlook Me

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    lol ok......grill grits eh? [funny]
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  6. _Lojak_

    _Lojak_ Dont Overlook Me

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    EGOTISM.......


    God forsake my mind couldn't relate, made phrenetic
    face rejection, my face blemished,hate for my reflection
    AID's infected, health neglected, self-eteem in depression
    system in confection, a mix of marijuana and anti-depressants
    I was always blessed with wholeness, mental, true and devine
    lines I write are complex like enzymes,spew my views in ryhmes
    im ten times that, of a poetical mastermind, einstien of "the verse"
    bars i burp, lyrical warlord, turnin my way, is a turn for "the worse"
    demented, mentioned as vicious and splendid in the same sentense
    my existance glistens,17 years ive been livin, infected with wisdom
    consider it ridiculous, to take a verse the distance, or to elaborate
    rap is a mastered trait, i write at the rate Your Phobia masterbates
    collaberate with none, im above their level on my own pedastool
    and if i check you dudes in a thread, better believe my i-net respect is due
    my protocol is to be known to yall as a self exclaimed know it all
    my EGO is raw, post nonsense and got the dick ryders in complete awe
    the veracious statements are awaitin the day my ego stands vagrant
    immaturity ancient, the same day my skill is level is in proper placement
    but face it, despite the hatred, my anus is still active in this rap ecosystem
    and i see no quitin, im driven off this cyber life im livin, admist my own EGOTISM
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  7. LeeHarveyOswald

    LeeHarveyOswald I Rape Children

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    06- poor sportsmanship
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  8. LeeHarveyOswald

    LeeHarveyOswald I Rape Children

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    if i can get an extension till 11 i can make it

    i just got back from work


    if not, thats cool
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  9. LeeHarveyOswald

    LeeHarveyOswald I Rape Children

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    Writer's Block



    Like a dark cloud, shrouded in myst, it sweeps and takes over
    Your thoughts and feelings, ideas and expressions, it is their owner
    Panic and frustration, your mind in it's own is in bedlam
    You know your feelings, but have no the words to express them
    Trying to meet deadlines but your mind is pushing you to stall
    You bang on the invisible barrior but cant break through the wall
    Finally the words like a trickle, bleed on to the paper
    Your thoughts explored and your stories are now safer
    Unlocked from the vault in your mind to share with everyone who reads it
    An inspiration to some, a far fetched storie who dont beleive it
    Bursting through the block in your head, reducing to shards
    As your emotions and mind chalk to the paper straight from the heart
    The world experiences what you have, they reflect on what youve wrote
    Some may not beleive your thinking but to each his own
    Thoughts woven in time, wordplay too intense to see what the riddles be
    This piece of mastery lays your spoken word down in the halls of history
    Knockoffs are all cheap, dont be bothered with how the biter's talk
    This came from you, and it all started at the first signs of writer's block
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  10. Macabre

    Macabre Guest

    Hopefully it's counted
    Too many no shows as it is
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  11. LeeHarveyOswald

    LeeHarveyOswald I Rape Children

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    i kno....
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  12. Vern Acular

    Vern Acular 12x RSTL Champ

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    this match'll continue cause atleast they showed
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  13. FortiFied Killa

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    nice battle

    lojak- you came harder then I expected you to, very nice. although I found your verse to be more of a battle peice then a topical peice. Flow was on tap throughout and wordplay was creative, although, as stated before, battle like.

    demik- Nice peice, although you could have came better. probably rushed this peice seeing how you did know if it would be excepted or not. Nice wordplay, flow kept up making reading easy.

    vote=demik, both these peices were nice, but demiks was more of a topical then lojaks in my opinion.
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  14. LeeHarveyOswald

    LeeHarveyOswald I Rape Children

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  15. S-M-O-K-E

    S-M-O-K-E DUH DUH DUH DUH!

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    uppin mufuckas
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  16. S-M-O-K-E

    S-M-O-K-E DUH DUH DUH DUH!

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  17. Negativity

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    vote: demik

    neither were proper topicals really...both were really just open mics..i know alot of ppl wont understand that..but it makes sense..anyway..demik won this for me coz he wrote about sum sort of topic anyway..although it wasnt a story..or tacklin important issues..(which is what i class as a topical)..he sitll came better than lojak..who's verse could not pass a topical..it was merely braggin..atleast dmeiks could be used as an rstl verse..braggin verses are time wastin open mics..not topicals..dmeiks was better anyway..

    pz
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  18. Vern Acular

    Vern Acular 12x RSTL Champ

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    agreed with shock...both were more on the open mic tip, umm, lol, naw they were topicals, a topical is an open mic, duh, anyway i did go with demik, i was feeling his structure more than lojaks, and that was the only area you 2 didn't match each other, props to lojak though, i never peeped you, and i did think you were just gonna be one of those cats that thinks you're god but you're not, keep working
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  19. _Lojak_

    _Lojak_ Dont Overlook Me

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    word thanks lol...i know...nobody peeps me lol......good verse demik ......
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  20. S-M-O-K-E

    S-M-O-K-E DUH DUH DUH DUH!

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    back at cha man
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