Discussion in 'the Onslaught' started by FórmÅl LôGíc, Jun 8, 2004.
pick up a mic and we can talk besides drop the ego man you were way cooler without it
Ya lyrics are wack as fuck, and do nothin' but bicker..
& show 'everybody ya gayness', like rainbow bumper stickers..
Nice, not spectacular, but good enough
Punchin you quicker, makes it easier to deny you..
Cause' you 'only speak into mics' going through a McDonald's drive-thru..
Haha, good concept, executed pretty well.
So why you, talk's an unsolvable question ay?...
I was here when you were NOTHING .. like the day before yesterday..
Thats a nice ass line. Its hard and witty.
Ya chest is sprayed, I don't have to prepare for ya wack verse..
Only 'preparation' I need, is the kind I use when my ass burns..
Ehh, not really feeling this, wasnt really directed toward him.
Smashed herb, Im spittin these lyrics to douse you kid ..
Ya 'lines only stick out', when ya shirt's turned outside in (seams) ..
Not liking this line.
Not an ounce of LiQ! .. and now ya here with ya ribs torn ..
And 'erased almost as easy' as drawings in coaches' clipboards..
A good concept, but you didnt execute it right.
Ya ripped whore, and I dont have to give you a reason..
You faggot, youll get stomped just as much as Christopher Reeves did..
Reeves lines are played, but this was a good flip.
Ya beat-en .. ill kill your ass in various ways..
This site 'doesnt really need you', like pimps who carry a cane ..
Not bad, not good though.
Damnit yer gay! .. now ill leave you in misery ..
& why your ranked number 1 should be featured on Unsolved Mysteries..
Good line, nice and hard. Good concept for a punch, liking this one.
Listen to me .. youre obviously a devoured loser..
You beat Tony Elbow in text ... I couldve done that without a computer.
Not sure what you meant "without a computer". A good line, but not sure where you were going with it.
Overall: A few nice hard hitting lines, some downs as well. Good flow, everything went smoothly together. An above average verse.
Liquid Ice aint even comin fresh
Named yaself after Ice Breakers mints..
..when you jus need em for ya breath
No, not a bad concept, but poorly executed.
Used to be pretty nice.. but now ya styles too old
Like P diddy.. you lost ya shyne a while ago
Shyne lines = very played. Not feeling this line either.
You never had sex man, no shit
Ya girl tried joinin you in bed.. and got covered in hand lotion
Ehh, not bad. Alright line, good concept, but executed right.
This aint the fuckin hospital.. its different now
Cuz im not gonna save ya blood after I spill it out
Nice hard hitting line.
So give up.. I wont get caught when I snipe you up, see
Cuz ill leave ya 'corps' in the ocean.. like the Marines
Another good line, liked this one.
You got 1 vote in 2 bouts.. thas sad clown
Only wanted to black out.. since you knew this is ya last round
Nice personal, hard hitting line here.
Theres no way ya ass will stay
My shit's hot.. and ya not in the Olympics..
..so you wont pass the flames
Not a clue where your going with ths line, wasnt really directed towards him at all.
You cant afford a new jersey, thas jus where ya house is
You pick up mad dimes... and I aint talkin bout chicks
Nice line, good concept, sorta played, but good flip.
Comparin you to me? fuck that, neva
My punches aint jus Beta... theyre the Alpha and Omega
Ehhh, couldve been a good line, but just written all wrong.
The point is.. you suck, im better
So you could never B me, C me.. or any other letter
Really nice closer, probably the best line you had.
Overall: Ive seen come better than this. Not sure if you werent trying or your a little rusty. Some good lines, but you also had your handful of not so good lines. Decent flow, but you did have the better closer.
Both came pretty average, having their good lines and bad lines. Both had a good flow to their verse but in the end Liquid was a bit more consistent. Imperial's verse was like a hit or miss for good line.
Vote - Liquid Ice.
Both move on to a 3 way battle.
Word.. I cant say i agree wit this, but whatever. Jus wait til next week.
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