Summer Slam: West Rd. 3 (1. Charles vs 12. Sherlock)

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  1. FórmÅl LôGíc

    FórmÅl LôGíc Black Listed

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    Rules:
    Lines Required
    -4 Lines for a no show.
    -Max 30 Lines
    -Min 10 Lines
    -You dont have to agree on lines though.

    Before The Battle
    -You must check into your battle thread atleast 6 hours before the verse is due.
    -No biting obviously.
    -No Swaying. (Ill make the prediction thread)
    -Extensions will be granted as long as you ask me 6 hours in advance.
    -Both people are allowed a check in post, any others a vote will be deucted.
    -Same applies to people in the tourny going into another persons thread.

    During & After The Battle
    -You must vote on 3 battles & post links in the your thread, but your incourged to vote on more.
    -If it comes down to a tie my fellow helpers will do the deciding votes.
    -You may up as many times as you want, but there is no swaying, and arguing in the thread. For every time I see either two, I will deduct one vote. Same applies to people outside of the battle if your in the tourny.

    Due Date
    -Verses due Saturday 1:59am Eastern Time/9:59pm Pacific Time
    -Votes due Monday 12 midnight.

    If you need to talk to someone get at: Formal Logic (Aim: MrWriteswell, Email: InvisionTheEnd@hotmail.com), rapter2k(aim: askkaboutme, email: askkaboutme@aol.com), Courtesy or Yo momma 2nd. Ill get their aim's and email soon.
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  2. NoShit Sherlock

    NoShit Sherlock Damn Homie

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  3. Charles

    Charles Kwelity

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    Charles is here.

    Old Style..

    Your no storm trooper, plus im hotter with rhymes
    Ya only relation to them
    ... Is the thousands of little solidiers you got in ya eye
    U get no pussy, which suggests u shud be rappin hotter
    Shit, ur magic stick got so many bad spells
    .. Im suprised u aint had to fuck with harry potter
    This niqqa aint deserve earth,the nerd just swallows dick
    So ima pop this black-head off the face, like a dermatologist
    I'll kidnapp ya whole fam faggit and theyll never come back
    Bitch, i'll be quick to bagdad like i was runnin terror attacks
    Who are u? u arnt my rival and im here to grasp the title
    U lose ya bottle when i turn,pop & empty..
    .. Like drinkin soft drinks that u cant recycle
    ___________________u wet yet? I wreck vets
    This is a bar wit nuttin at each end
    ...like the ones u try n bench press__________________
    My flows reach ya, and im sure your a known cheater
    Always wantin 'too tes-tical'...
    ... Like you was method mans old teacher
    This was a breeze to fuckin wreck you, im sure ur fuckin scared
    Come again and get all bust up..
    ... Like those wonder bras you love to wear..

    -Charles The Wordsmith
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  4. NoShit Sherlock

    NoShit Sherlock Damn Homie

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    Charles..... man dont push me
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    I would like da taste of victory, and chance at a bully
    but dis cat have been eaten b4
    So what man u kno like, to beat second hand pussy????????

    aghhh haaaa lets go

    Sher's driven to Ram in ya moms legs, i should start at her cheek
    fucka freak car accident, your a fuckin accident in a car by a freak
    this part can get bleepd----------------- u know what can be worse
    da part wit da" ---------------------", was da only thing exciting about ya verse
    learn n observe, fucka permanent nerd,
    we got rid of da first 2 rounds, now its ur turn fa da curve
    get what u deserve, feel da beam & get blasted away
    but da infa red dot will just go along wit da acne in ya face
    SherLock carry da K.......... R.I.P ok dawg
    b'cuz son must mos def blind....like ray charles

    pity...im sonnin you, a slut fa a mother is what ya got simply
    fucka dead beat dad....
    'cuz when ya mom 'turn' fa ya 'pops' the bed was 'empty'
    come and get me, this faggot is neva wild
    whats with this old shit, we like it betta when ya flipped Resin Style
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  5. Charles

    Charles Kwelity

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    Niqqa got ran like red lights.
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  6. Charles

    Charles Kwelity

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    Up!!!!!!!
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  7. aGiLity Starr*

    aGiLity Starr* Live Broadcast.

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    Vote= Charles.


    Flow was superior, punches were harder hittin', more quotables .. style is awful compared to the one you used last round however.

    Sherlock, ya verse was dope too, I cant complain.. Charles's was just better, plain and simple. nice job you guys.

    vote on LiQ vs Imperial.
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  8. FaceLess

    FaceLess jook is my dad..

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    vote-Charles


    I was feeling both alot
    But i just think charles was a lil more creative and had the better disses
    sherlock u were good to...I just think charles got ya here
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  9. FórmÅl LôGíc

    FórmÅl LôGíc Black Listed

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    2-0. Dont forget to vote. I will take wins away.
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  10. Imperial

    Imperial Lex

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    Nice battle here. Both were good. Charles had the black-head line, bench press one was creative. The whole verse was overall good. Sherlock had an overall good verse too. His verse plays were nice disses. But Sherlock didnt have as many quotables. Nice battle though, good read from both.

    Vote: Charles
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  11. PrOvOcAtiVeThOuGhT

    PrOvOcAtiVeThOuGhT New Member

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    Charles kinda kept comin from one angle in the beginning wich takes away from the quality but shit had some cool lines like the benchpress line even tho I am not really a fan of the obvious text punches

    sherlock everyline you have to explain the way you did it is jus a bit forced..iono how to say it but that fucked everything up for me I didnt even really read the whole verse, even tho I saw you had some nice lines the way you put it down jus fucked it up for me

    v/charles
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  12. FórmÅl LôGíc

    FórmÅl LôGíc Black Listed

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    4-0.

    Charles wins.
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