Summer Slam: West Rd. 1 (7. Word up vs. 10. Est. 1983)

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  1. FórmÅl LôGíc

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  3. word up

    word up i spell gud

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    12 Bars
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    word up aka nasif aka the illterate one



    Im winning by a large margin, this battle won’t be closer
    Since you couldn’t make crisp bread if it came from the toaster
    12lines=12bars? Honestly it can’t get any easier
    Not only can’t this kid formulate a sentence, he can’t add either
    Im’a give you a fair beating leave you with impaired breathing
    Not to mention NJ has about as many dope heads as a D.A.R.E meeting
    His bandwagon is lame, making a racket as whole
    And consists of a basket being added to the bike that he stole
    Wanna take summer slam, Sif’s pestering dudes for dirt
    But he sucks at punches and mad cause wrestling moves won’t work
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    Torch1 Speak Pimp Fluently

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    His bandwagon is lame, making a racket as whole
    And consists of a basket being added to the bike that he stole


    comedy....
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  6. word up

    word up i spell gud

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    can i do my verse tonight yo
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  8. word up

    word up i spell gud

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    imma show you all love like the girls do lil fizz
    1983...guess that is how old your punchlines really is/
    used to be wack...now im a full time felon
    call me a wolf eatin the red shit out you like a watermelon/
    looking ugly ass fuck now please back away
    or have more variety of combos to ur mouth like a buffet/
    we all no im the most popular so you not in my league
    im on the run for the title while your ass get fatigue/
    we see you got dickryders...but dont see why
    you gonna related to r kelly the way your sprint gonna fly/


    i didnt even try
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  9. BLooDSHoTT

    BLooDSHoTT R.I.P. Point Game

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    .. Lol ite battle

    Est- your shit was aight .. only line i liked & thought was witty was the Dare meeting line .. pretty good concept/punch there .. not true personals .. felt you couldve came much harder .. & shouldve added some multies for better consistency .. ite here

    Nasif- your punches were descent ... i liked the 1983 line & buffet lines .. personals were aight .. had nuttin cept that 1983 line .. looks like you didnt put much effort into it .. but i still felt you had the edge on this

    Vote- Nasif
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  10. QuicK SyllaBle

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    vote-1983.....punches were better...haha funnier....better flow...peace yall
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    1-1

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  12. FaceLess

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    i liked esties bandwagon and dare meeting couplets,
    i liked the facted that nasif can actually spell in hisverse's now,and his punchline and buffet lines


    Shit it's a shocker but i think Nasif took it,
    i think est thought it was a gimmie and didnt try
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  13. Serge dot T

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    lol@nasif actually winnin this
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  15. FórmÅl LôGíc

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    Thanks for showing, votes due tomorrow.
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  16. Tony Elbow

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    this battle was close, coz both came really wiiizzzacckk

    Est 1983 I only liked this from you:
    12lines=12bars? Honestly it can’t get any easier
    Not only can’t this kid formulate a sentence, he can’t add either
    ^nice idea but worded wrong..everything else was below average to be honest


    Word up I liked
    1983...guess that is how old your punchlines really is/
    ^^even tho set-up was odd
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    looking ugly ass fuck now please back away
    or have more variety of combos to ur mouth like a buffet/
    ^^best line of the battle hence you win well done

    Vote: Word up
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  18. FórmÅl LôGíc

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    Vote - Est. 1983

    Both came fairly nice. Word had his good punch or two, but 1983 was tad more consisten with his punches.
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  19. FórmÅl LôGíc

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    Est. 1983 wins.

    Word up didnt post links, and battle was 3-2. Each link is minus 1 vote. Dont argue!
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